App— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: حاول تحسين الطلاقة وتقليل الترددات مثل "uh" و"can you Yanni". استخدم جمل أكثر وضوحًا وترتيبًا لتجنب التكرار، وركز على تقديم معلومات محددة ومرتبة عن التطبيقات التي تستخدمها.

例: Recently, I have used several apps on my phone, such as Snapchat, Instagram, Twitter, Facebook, and WhatsApp. I especially like WhatsApp because it allows me to send many messages quickly and easily.

提案: حاول استخدام جمل كاملة وواضحة مع تقليل الترددات. قدم تفاصيل محددة عن سبب اهتمامك بهذه التطبيقات، واستخدم روابط بين الجمل لجعل الإجابة أكثر ترابطًا ومنطقية.

例: I am usually interested in communication apps like WhatsApp because many of my friends use it. I enjoy sending messages and staying connected with them through this app.

提案: حاول تنظيم إجابتك بشكل أفضل واستخدم كلمات ربط لتوضيح الأفكار. قدم أمثلة محددة عن كيفية اكتشاف التطبيقات الجديدة وشرح الطرق التي تستخدمها لذلك.

例: I usually find out about different apps through social media and the Internet. For example, I learn about new apps on Instagram or from friends who share useful information online.

提案: حاول التعبير عن أفكارك بشكل أكثر وضوحًا وترتيبًا. اشرح لماذا تود استخدام تطبيقات معينة في المستقبل وقدم أمثلة محددة عن فوائدها.

例: In the future, I would like to continue using WhatsApp because it is easy to use and helps me stay in touch with my family. Also, many teachers use it as a platform for learning, which I find very helpful.

× Recently, I use many apps in my phone.

✓ Recently, I have used many apps on my phone.

The sentence refers to recent past actions, so the present perfect tense 'have used' is appropriate instead of simple present 'use'. Also, the preposition 'on' is correct for devices like phones.

× Recently, I use many apps in my phone.

✓ Recently, I have used many apps on my phone.

The correct preposition to indicate something installed or used on a device is 'on', not 'in'.

× There are a lot of apps, for example, Snapchat, Instagram, Twitter, Facebook, WhatsApp uh, can you Yanni, you can uh, send many message and uh, it is uh, very deliver for.

✓ There are a lot of apps, for example, Snapchat, Instagram, Twitter, Facebook, WhatsApp. You can send many messages, and it is very convenient.

The phrase 'many message' should be 'many messages' to match plural form. Also, 'very deliver for' is incorrect; 'very convenient' or 'very useful' fits better.

× You can send many message and uh, it is uh, very deliver for.

✓ You can send many messages, and it is very convenient.

The noun 'message' should be plural 'messages' when preceded by 'many'.

× Especially I, uh, kind of apps, uh, I intersect it.

✓ Especially, I like kinds of apps, uh, I am interested in them.

The verb 'intersect' is incorrect here; the correct phrase is 'interested in'. Also, 'kind of apps' should be 'kinds of apps' or 'types of apps'.

× Especially I, uh, kind of apps, uh, I intersect it.

✓ Especially, I like kinds of apps, uh, I am interested in them.

The preposition 'in' is required after 'interested' to indicate the object of interest.

× Especially I, uh, kind of apps, uh, I intersect it.

✓ Especially, I like kinds of apps, uh, I am interested in them.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to plural 'apps'; 'them' is the correct plural pronoun.

× I like WhatsApp very much because many people, uh, send off it.

✓ I like WhatsApp very much because many people use it.

The phrase 'send off it' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'use' with the preposition 'it' as the object.

× Uh, I like send a message and uh, my friend, uh, delivered it.

✓ I like to send messages, and my friends receive them.

The verb 'send' should be in infinitive form 'to send' after 'like'. Also, 'delivered it' is incorrect; 'receive them' fits better.

× Uh, I like send a message and uh, my friend, uh, delivered it.

✓ I like to send messages, and my friends receive them.

'Message' should be plural 'messages' to indicate multiple messages; 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'many people' context.

× Actually, I find it different apps in social media, uh, for example, Internet.

✓ Actually, I find different apps on social media, for example, the Internet.

The preposition 'on' is used with 'social media'. Also, 'the Internet' requires the definite article 'the'.

× Actually, I find it different apps in social media, uh, for example, Internet.

✓ Actually, I find different apps on social media, for example, the Internet.

The noun 'Internet' requires the definite article 'the'.

× Many people, uh, use Internet to get uh, many information and knowledge about this and how to use it, how to learn.

✓ Many people use the Internet to get a lot of information and knowledge about this and how to use it, how to learn.

'Use the Internet' is correct; 'many information' is incorrect because 'information' is uncountable and should be preceded by 'a lot of'.

× Many people, uh, use Internet to get uh, many information and knowledge about this and how to use it, how to learn.

✓ Many people use the Internet to get a lot of information and knowledge about this and how to use it, how to learn.

'Information' is uncountable; 'many' cannot be used with uncountable nouns. Use 'a lot of' instead.

× A lot of people learn from social media, for example on Instagram.

✓ A lot of people learn from social media, for example, on Instagram.

A comma is needed after 'for example' to separate the phrase properly.

× I would like to use app uh, WhatsApp.

✓ I would like to use the app WhatsApp.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'app' when specifying a particular app.

× I like WhatsApp, my family send from it.

✓ I like WhatsApp; my family sends messages through it.

The phrase 'send from it' is incorrect; 'send messages through it' is appropriate. Also, 'family' as a singular noun requires 'sends'.

× I like WhatsApp, my family send from it.

✓ I like WhatsApp; my family sends messages through it.

The verb 'send' should be 'sends' to agree with the singular collective noun 'family'.

× Uh, also it is easy to send it and many people uh, learn from WhatsApp uh, for example, platform, a lot of people, a lot of teachers and.

✓ Also, it is easy to send messages, and many people learn from WhatsApp. For example, many teachers use the platform.

The phrase 'send it' is vague; 'send messages' is clearer. The sentence is fragmented and needs restructuring for clarity.