App— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“want to browsing”应为“want to browse”，同时表达不够简洁自然。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更流畅。

例: I have recently used Instagram because I enjoy browsing posts and stories shared by my friends. I also like to share my daily life on the platform.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“really interested in”应为“really interested in”，且表达重复且冗长。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用恰当的连接词。

例: I am usually interested in social media apps because they allow me to share my thoughts and feelings, and also keep in touch with my friends by browsing their posts and stories.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“would told me”应为“told me”，且表达不够连贯。建议注意时态和主谓一致，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I usually find out about different apps through recommendations from my friends. For example, they suggested study-related apps like GoodNotes and Schedule Planner, which they said are very useful for improving academic performance.

提案: 回答内容较好，但存在语法和表达不够自然的问题，如“type few words and send it out”应为“type a few words and send it”. 建议注意冠词使用和句子连贯性。

例: In the future, I would like to use more AI-related apps because I believe artificial intelligence will become essential. For instance, these apps can help solve academic problems or daily challenges by simply typing a few words and receiving multiple possible solutions.

× Instagram is the app that I used recently because I want to browsing different post views or story posted by my friends and I also like to share my daily on the Instagram.

✓ Instagram is the app that I used recently because I want to browse different posts or stories posted by my friends and I also like to share my daily life on Instagram.

动词后面接动名词时，应该用动词原形加 -ing 形式，但在这里 want 后面应接动词原形 browse，而不是 browsing。'post views' 应改为复数 'posts'，'story' 应改为复数 'stories'，'share my daily' 不完整，应补充为 'share my daily life'。此外，'on the Instagram' 中 'the' 不需要。

× Instagram is the app that I used recently because I want to browsing different post views or story posted by my friends and I also like to share my daily on the Instagram.

✓ Instagram is the app that I used recently because I want to browse different posts or stories posted by my friends and I also like to share my daily life on Instagram.

介词 'on the Instagram' 中 'the' 是多余的，正确用法是 'on Instagram'。

× I think apps like social media are something that I really interested in, not only allow me to share my thoughts, feelings on the social media but also I can get in touch with my friends through testing or browsing their posts or story on the social media.

✓ I think apps like social media are something that I am really interested in, not only allowing me to share my thoughts and feelings on social media but also letting me get in touch with my friends through texting or browsing their posts or stories on social media.

'I really interested in' 缺少系动词，应为 'I am really interested in'。'not only allow me' 应改为 'not only allowing me' 以保持句子结构一致。'testing' 应为 'texting'，'story' 应为复数 'stories'，'on the social media' 中 'the' 多余，应去掉。

× I think apps like social media are something that I really interested in, not only allow me to share my thoughts, feelings on the social media but also I can get in touch with my friends through testing or browsing their posts or story on the social media.

✓ I think apps like social media are something that I am really interested in, not only allowing me to share my thoughts and feelings on social media but also letting me get in touch with my friends through texting or browsing their posts or stories on social media.

'on the social media' 中 'the' 是多余的，正确用法是 'on social media'。

× Some of the apps are recommended by my friends, for example apps that related to study like Good notes or Schedule planner. My friends would told me that these app are super useful for your academic performance and they highly recommend me to download it.

✓ Some of the apps are recommended by my friends, for example apps that are related to study like GoodNotes or Schedule Planner. My friends told me that these apps are super useful for your academic performance and they highly recommend me to download them.

'apps that related' 缺少系动词，应为 'apps that are related'。'would told' 是错误的过去式，应为 'told'。'these app' 应为复数 'these apps'。'recommend me to download it' 中 'it' 应改为复数 'them'，因为指的是多个应用。

× Some of the apps are recommended by my friends, for example apps that related to study like Good notes or Schedule planner. My friends would told me that these app are super useful for your academic performance and they highly recommend me to download it.

✓ Some of the apps are recommended by my friends, for example apps that are related to study like GoodNotes or Schedule Planner. My friends told me that these apps are super useful for your academic performance and they highly recommend me to download them.

'Good notes' 和 'Schedule planner' 是专有名词，应大写为 'GoodNotes' 和 'Schedule Planner'。

× I think I would use more AI related apps in my future because I believe artificial intelligence would become very important or indispensable to our future. For example, it could solve your academic problem or daily difficulties. Just type few words and send it out. It could give you many possible solution.

✓ I think I will use more AI-related apps in my future because I believe artificial intelligence will become very important and indispensable to our future. For example, it can solve your academic problems or daily difficulties. Just type a few words and send them out. It can give you many possible solutions.

'would use' 应改为将来时 'will use'，'would become' 应改为 'will become'，表示对未来的预测。'AI related' 应加连字符为 'AI-related'。'academic problem' 应为复数 'academic problems'。'Just type few words' 缺少冠词，应为 'Just type a few words'。'send it out' 中 'it' 应为复数 'them'。'many possible solution' 应为复数 'many possible solutions'。

× Just type few words and send it out.

✓ Just type a few words and send them out.

'few' 前面需要冠词 'a'，表示 '一些'。此外，'send it out' 中 'it' 指代不明确，应改为复数 'them'，与 'words' 一致。