App— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 答案能表达基本意思，但存在语法错误、用词不准确和冗长。建议用一到两句开门见山的主题句，然后用一到两句具体细节支持。注意动词时态和单数/复数一致（例如：‘I usually use’ 而不是 ‘are usually use’），以及名词复数（‘interests’）。可以加入连接词（for example, also）让回答更连贯。

例: I often use social media apps such as Songchu to share photos and watch short videos. I also use them to connect with people who share similar interests, for example by following hobby groups and commenting on posts.

提案: 回答重复并且有发音/拼写导致的词汇错误（如 ‘UC’, ‘Cell Hong Shu’, ‘shot videos’）。建议首先给出主题句，然后用一到两句具体功能举例来说明为什么感兴趣。保持句子简洁并使用正确短语（share photos, watch short videos, find people with similar interests）。

例: I'm mainly interested in social media apps. For instance, I use platforms to share photos, watch short videos, and meet people who have similar interests.

提案: 这段回答结构清晰、细节具体但时态一致性可以改进。建议开头用明确主题句，然后用连接词（for example, then）串联步骤。注意公司/品牌名用法（Xiaomi是手机品牌，better say ‘on social media’ or ‘from creators’）。

例: I usually find new apps on social media. For example, creators post short recommendation videos that explain how the app works, and after watching a few clips I often download the app and try it out myself.

提案: 回答明确并包含具体细节，但可以更自然地表达偏好和理由。建议首句直接表明偏好，然后用一到两句说明原因和具体标准（clear privacy settings, data encryption, minimal data collection）。注意主谓一致（settings that allow）。

例: I will keep using social media, but in the future I'll choose apps that protect users' personal data. For example, I prefer platforms with clear privacy settings, strong encryption, and options to limit what information is visible to others.

× I've been using social media apps such as Songchu are usually use it to share photos and show videos.

✓ I've been using social media apps such as Songchu; I usually use them to share photos and show videos.

句子中有几个问题：1) 原句把两部分混在一起，缺乏连词或标点，造成句子结构错误，应拆成两部分或用分号连接（属于句子结构/动词搭配问题）。2) “are usually use it” 中动词形式和主语不一致，且使用了多余的代词“it”。正确应为“I usually use them” 或 “I usually use it” 取决于指代单数或复数，这里指 apps（复数），应使用复数代词和动词形式。建议注意主语与动词和代词的一致性，并用标点或连词分清句子成分。

× Apart from this, I will look for people who have similar interest.

✓ Apart from this, I look for people who have similar interests.

原句用“will”表达习惯性动作不合适，习惯性或经常发生的动作应使用一般现在时；此外“interest”在此应为复数“interests”以与people搭配。建议将习惯性行为用一般现在时，并注意名词单复数。

× Apps such as Cell Hong Shu are usually UC to share my photo, watch shot videos and find some people who share interest with me.

✓ Apps such as Cell Hong Shu are usually used to share my photos, watch short videos, and find people who share interests with me.

句子存在拼写和结构问题：1) “UC” 显然是拼写或输入错误，应该是“used”。2) “photo” 应为复数 “photos”；“shot videos” 应为 “short videos”。3) 并列动词时需统一形式并用逗号分隔。4) “share interest with me” 应为 “share interests with me” 或 “have similar interests”。建议检查拼写，确保动词形式一致，名词复数和并列结构正确。

× Usually, I discover a new app from social media platforms such as Xiaomi.

✓ Usually, I discover new apps from social media platforms such as Xiaomi.

原句中“a new app” 与副词“Usually” 搭配显得不自然，通常应该用复数“new apps” 表示经常发现应用；这属于时态和数的一致性选择。建议描述经常性动作时使用一般现在时并考虑复数以表示多次发生。

× Creators will post short recommendations and show us how to use it as a beginner.

✓ Creators post short recommendations and show us how to use them as beginners.

原句中使用“will” 表示未来，而实际是描述常态行为，应使用一般现在时“post”。此外，“it” 指代 apps（复数）应改为“them”；“a beginner” 指泛指用户，改为复数“beginners” 更自然。建议用一般现在时描述常态，注意代词与先行词的数一致。

× After watching a few videos, I will download it and try to use it myself.

✓ After watching a few videos, I download it and try to use it myself.

句子描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时而非“will”。另外代词“it”可以保留若指单个应用，若指复数应改为“them”。建议用一般现在时描述习惯性行动，并确保代词数一致。

× I will continue to use social media platforms, but I prefer apps that protect users personal data.

✓ I will continue to use social media platforms, but I prefer apps that protect users' personal data.

原句的主要问题是所有格标记缺失，“users personal data” 应为 “users' personal data”。这一点属于所有格/冠词/标点的错误（指向第22项 Article errors 与所有格，但更贴切为冠词/所有格）。建议在表示所属关系时加撇号s。

× For example, I will choose apps with clear privacy settings that allows me to choose what information is visible to others.

✓ For example, I will choose apps with clear privacy settings that allow me to choose what information is visible to others.

关系代词 'that' 指代复数名词 'privacy settings'，从句中的动词应与复数主语一致，故应为 'allow' 而不是 'allows'。这是主谓一致错误。建议识别先行词的单复数并使从句动词一致。