App— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the reply grammatically correct, concise, and add a brief specific detail about how you used the app. Start with a clear topic sentence, then one supporting detail. Use linking word like “because” or “for” to connect ideas.

例: I have recently been using Telegram. I use it to join study groups and receive shared lecture notes and summaries, which help me revise quickly for exams.

提案: Give one clear topic sentence naming the kinds of apps you like, then provide one specific reason or example. Keep sentences short and use linking words like “because” or “for example.” Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

例: I am usually interested in educational apps because they help me learn new skills. For example, I use language-learning and coding apps to practise every day and track my progress.

提案: Answer directly: say the methods you use to find apps and give one concrete example. Use linking words such as “so” or “for instance” to join ideas, and avoid repetition.

例: I usually find apps by searching online on my laptop and reading reviews on app stores. For instance, I compare ratings and read user comments on Google Play to choose the most reliable apps.

提案: State clearly which apps you want to use and one or two specific reasons. Limit to two sentences: a topic sentence and a supporting detail. Use precise vocabulary (e.g. “AI-powered educational apps”) and linking words like “because” or “for example.”

例: In the future I would like to use AI-powered educational apps because they provide personalised learning and instant feedback. For example, an AI tutor could suggest study plans and give exercises tailored to my weak areas.

× 'I recently used telegram at lot of help in my study material.'

✓ 'I recently used Telegram a lot; it was helpful for my study materials.'

'Telegram' is a proper noun and should be capitalized. 'a lot' is the correct phrase instead of 'at lot'. 'help' as a noun needs an article or descriptive clause; better to say 'it was helpful'. 'study material' should be plural 'study materials' for general resources. Overall reordering improves clarity.

× 'The apps are in a good inform and for good for me which I can with the help of the app I can take some new take some good things to quickly is some work.'

✓ 'The apps provide useful information and help me learn new things quickly.'

'in a good inform' and 'for good for me' are ungrammatical phrases. The sentence is redundant and lacks clear subject-verb structure. Simplify to a clear subject ('The apps') and verbs ('provide', 'help') and group related ideas: useful information and learning new things quickly.

× 'Basically I am using laptop and many sites they are searching a best good app and then easily there is I can I can see that many types of apps.'

✓ 'Basically I use a laptop and browse many websites to search for the best apps; I can easily see many types of apps.'

'using laptop' needs an article: 'use a laptop' or 'using a laptop'. 'sites they are searching' is incorrect word order; use 'browse websites to search for'. 'a best good app' is ungrammatical; use 'the best apps' or 'a good app'. Removed repeated 'I can' and clarified flow.

× 'In future I use the most advanced and AI generated apps because they are knowledge.'

✓ 'In the future I will use the most advanced AI-generated apps because they provide knowledge.'

'In future' should be 'In the future'. The sentence refers to a future intention so use future tense 'will use'. 'AI generated' should be hyphenated as 'AI-generated' when used as an adjective. 'they are knowledge' is incorrect—use 'they provide knowledge' or 'they are informative'.

× 'They are good for me in learning new skills, new information about something, object, any particular person.'

✓ 'They are good for helping me learn new skills and find information about topics, objects, or specific people.'

List items were awkward ('something, object, any particular person'). Use parallel structure: 'topics, objects, or specific people'. Replace 'good for me in learning' with 'good for helping me learn' for correct use of adjectives and verbs.

× 'Everything is they help lot of.'

✓ 'Overall, they help a lot.'

'Everything is they help lot of' is ungrammatical and unclear. Rearrange to 'they help a lot' and add 'Overall' to convey general summary. Include article 'a' in 'a lot'.