Party— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法错误影响了表达的自然性和准确性。建议注意主谓一致，如"who like"应为"who likes"，并且可以用更丰富的词汇表达原因。

例: Actually, I don't really enjoy parties because I'm quite introverted. I prefer spending time alone at home where I feel more comfortable.

提案: 回答中时态使用不准确，应该用过去时态描述过去的情况。此外，句子结构稍显混乱，建议简化句子并注意主谓一致。

例: I didn't have many parties when I was a child because my grandmother, who lived with us, suffered from depression and didn't like having many people at home.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，句子结构混乱，建议使用简单明了的句子，并注意时态和词汇的正确使用。

例: Yes, I organized my birthday party this year with my friends at a special restaurant in my hometown. We took many photos and enjoyed delicious cakes.

× I'm not the kind of person who like parties.

✓ I'm not the kind of person who likes parties.

这里的主语是单数的"person"，关系代词"who"指代单数，因此谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"likes"，而不是复数形式"like"。

× Actually, I don't have parties when I was a child.

✓ Actually, I didn't have parties when I was a child.

句子描述过去的情况，应该使用过去时态。"don't have"是现在时，应该改为过去时"didn't have"。

× she suffered from depression and don't like having a lot of people at home.

✓ she suffered from depression and doesn't like having a lot of people at home.

主语是单数"she"，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"doesn't like"，而不是复数形式"don't like"。

× Well, definitely has is happened this year.

✓ Well, it definitely has happened this year.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语"it"，且"has is happened"是错误的动词形式，应改为"has happened"。

× I organized my birthday party with my friend in my hometown way once you are special restaurant where we took a lot of photos and enjoying the delicious cakes.

✓ I organized my birthday party with my friend in my hometown at a special restaurant where we took a lot of photos and enjoyed the delicious cakes.

句子中"way once you are special restaurant"结构混乱，应改为"at a special restaurant"。此外，动词时态应统一，"enjoying"应改为过去时"enjoyed"。