Party— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构混乱。建议学习并练习正确的句子结构，避免重复和不连贯的表达。可以尝试用简单明了的句子直接表达观点，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: To be honest, I don't enjoy parties because I am an introverted person. I find it difficult to socialize with people I don't know well.

提案: 回答内容不连贯，句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议练习用完整句子回答问题，并使用连接词使内容连贯。可以具体说明频率和场合，避免重复和无意义的句子。

例: When I was a kid, I attended parties about two or three times a year. Most of them were small birthday parties held by my friends.

提案: 语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议学习正确的时态和句子结构，避免语法错误。可以用简单句表达自己的经历和原因，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: To be honest, I have never organized a party. My parents usually control the parties because they worry I might not make good decisions.

× I don't enjoy party because I am a introverted people who.

✓ I don't enjoy parties because I am an introverted person.

这里 'party' 应该用复数形式 'parties'，因为表示一般的复数概念；'people' 是复数，前面用单数 'a' 不匹配，应该用单数 'person'。

× I am a introverted people who. Are not all who is not good at socializing with others such as someone I don't know?

✓ I am an introverted person who is not good at socializing with others, especially people I don't know.

原句结构混乱，缺少谓语，且句子断裂。需要合并成完整句子，保证主谓一致和逻辑通顺。

× How often did you have a party when you were a kid?

✓ How often did you have parties when you were a kid?

'party' 应用复数形式 'parties'，因为表示多次的聚会。

× About twice or three times a year on the party.

✓ About two or three times a year at parties.

'party' 应用复数形式 'parties'，且介词应为 'at' 表示在某种活动场合。

× Party early.

✓ Parties were usually held early.

原句缺少主语和谓语，语义不完整，需要补充完整句子。

× Happened in my friend's birthday.

✓ They happened on my friend's birthday.

缺少主语，且介词应为 'on' 用于表示具体日期。

× Will our presence will help?

✓ Will our presence help?

重复使用了助动词 'will'，语法错误，应去掉一个。

× Our presence held a small party for us to celebrate someone's birthday.

✓ Our parents held a small party for us to celebrate someone's birthday.

'Our presence' 不能作为主语，应该是 'Our parents' 或其他合适主语。

× To be honest, I hasn't organized a party on most of times the party.

✓ To be honest, I haven't organized a party most of the time.

'hasn't' 应为 'haven't' 因为主语是第一人称单数；'on most of times the party' 结构不正确，应简化为 'most of the time'。

× Was controlled by my parents because they think I maybe not have good choice to organize a party.

✓ It was controlled by my parents because they thought I might not have good choices to organize a party.

时态应保持一致，前半句用过去时 'was controlled'，后半句 'think' 应改为过去时 'thought'；'maybe' 应改为情态动词 'might'；'choice' 应用复数 'choices'。

× They worry about me.

✓ They worried about me.

前文时态为过去时，保持时态一致，'worry' 应改为过去时 'worried'。