Party— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Исправьте грамматические ошибки и используйте более естественные выражения. Сделайте ответ короче и структурированнее: сначала четко ответьте на вопрос, затем добавьте одно-два поддерживающих предложения с конкретикой. Избегайте лишних слов и повторов, замените «I very like» на «I really like» и «in the job» на «after a hard day at work».

例: Yes, I really like parties. They are a great way to relax after a hard day at work, and I enjoy socializing with friends and meeting new people.

提案: Улучшите грамматику времени и порядок слов, дайте ясное и конкретное объяснение. Используйте связку для плавного перехода и избегайте неправильных форм (например, «forbidden» → «forbade»). Сделайте ответ примерно из 2 предложений: отрицание плюс причина и краткая деталь.

例: I didn't go to many parties as a child because my parents forbade them. Instead, I usually spent time with a few close friends at home playing games or watching films.

提案: Исправьте форму слов и согласование времен, используйте более естественные фразы и конкретику. Начните с прямого ответа, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретные детали о том, что вы делали на вечеринке. Замените «sleepover» на «a sleepover» и «we talk» на «we talked».

例: Yes, I once organized a sleepover when I was a child. We stayed up late chatting about our future plans, played board games and watched movies, so we had a really memorable night.

× Yes, I very like parties.

✓ Yes, I really like parties.

The adverb 'very' cannot modify the verb 'like' directly; use 'really' or 'very much' to modify verbs. Suggestion: use 'I really like' or 'I like ... very much' for correct adverb placement.

× In my opinion, it is the great opportunity to relax after difficult days in the job.

✓ In my opinion, it is a great opportunity to relax after difficult days at work.

Use the indefinite article 'a' before singular countable noun 'great opportunity'. 'In the job' is unnatural; use 'at work' to refer to working life. Also 'difficult days' should be followed by 'at work'.

× Also, I really like to hang out with my friends in my free time.

✓ Also, I really like hanging out with my friends in my free time.

After 'like', both 'to' infinitive and '-ing' form are possible, but 'like hanging out' is more natural for habitual activities. Suggestion: use 'I really like hanging out' or keep 'I really like to hang out' depending on style.

× Actually, when I was a child I didn't go to the parties at all because parents forbidden me this, so I usually spend time with my friends at home.

✓ Actually, when I was a child I didn't go to parties at all because my parents forbade me, so I usually spent time with my friends at home.

'Forbidden' is past participle; the correct past simple is 'forbade'. 'Parents' needs a possessive 'my parents'. Also when describing habitual past actions use past simple 'spent' not present 'spend'. 'The parties' -> 'parties' (no article) is more natural.

× Yes, actually when I was a child I organized sleepover and it was very fascinating pastime.

✓ Yes, actually when I was a child I organized a sleepover and it was a very fascinating pastime.

Countable nouns 'sleepover' and 'pastime' need the indefinite article 'a'. Tense is past and correct. Also 'fascinating' is acceptable but 'very' + adjective is fine.

× I spent a great time with my close friends and we talk about different topics and discuss plans of our future.

✓ I spent a great time with my close friends and we talked about different topics and discussed plans for our future.

Main clause is past 'I spent', so subsequent verbs should be past: 'talked' and 'discussed'. 'Plans of our future' is unnatural; use 'plans for our future'.