Party— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答自然并直接，但可更精练并加入一两句具体例子或对比来丰富内容。注意句子数量不超过5句，避免重复表达（例如“prefer quieter evenings”与“would rather relax”意义接近）。

例: I usually don’t enjoy parties because I’m introverted and feel uneasy in large crowds. For example, at crowded events I often leave early and prefer staying home reading a novel where I can relax.

提案: 回答清楚具体，包含频率与原因。可以增加一处细节（如年龄或一次特别的记忆）来使内容更生动，但注意保持连贯并使用连接词。

例: I usually had small birthday celebrations as a child because my family didn’t like big parties. For example, when I turned eight we invited only grandparents and cousins, had a simple cake and played board games — I remember feeling very happy.

提案: 内容具体但有语法和用词错误（时态与主谓一致，如“arrange”应为“arranged”，“sends”应为“sent”）。建议把动作按顺序列出并用连接词使条理更清晰。保持句子数量在不超过5句。

例: Yes, I organized my brother’s birthday once. I booked a small cake, arranged light refreshments and music, and sent invitations and reminders so guests would attend on time.

× I organized a party once for my brother's birthday. I booked a small cake, arrange light refreshments and music, and sends our invitations and reminders so everyone could attend.

✓ I organized a party once for my brother's birthday. I booked a small cake, arranged light refreshments and music, and sent our invitations and reminders so everyone could attend.

错误类型涉及动词时态和主谓一致，需按过去式一致使用。句子描述的是过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去式：booked（已正确）、arranged（原句用原形 arrange，应改为过去式）和 sent（原句用现在时 sends，应改为过去式 sent 并且主语为 I，所以不加 -s）。建议：描述过去的事件时，确保所有主要动词都使用过去式；检查每个并列动词是否与句子的时态一致，并注意第三人称单数 -s 只用于现在时的第三人称主语。