Traffic— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details with linking words like 'because' or 'especially'.

例: Yes, there are many crosswalks around where I live because it is a crowded area. In particular, near the courthouse and the main square, there are several crosswalks to help pedestrians cross safely.

提案: Focus on making your answer complete and grammatically correct. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear words. Try to give a specific example to support your opinion.

例: Yes, I would like to change the traffic lights because many of them are broken. For example, when I am in a taxi, sometimes we have to wait a long time at a traffic light that does not change, which is very frustrating.

× Yes, says there are a lot of crosswalks around the place I live because I live in a crowded area.

✓ Yes, I say there are a lot of crosswalks around the place I live because I live in a crowded area.

The original sentence uses 'says' incorrectly without a subject. The correct subject 'I' should be used with the verb 'say' to agree in number and person. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× An I am close by courthouse so there is a lot of crosswalks, especially in the square I think, and that's it.

✓ And I am close by the courthouse so there are a lot of crosswalks, especially in the square I think, and that's it.

The phrase 'a lot of crosswalks' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'courthouse' needs the definite article 'the'. This is a singular and plural issue and article error.

× Yes I think many traffic lights has been broken and I think it's Bowser bothering me becauses when I in the taxi I stay in the taxi we are waiting for the traffic light to start but it didn't and I think.

✓ Yes, I think many traffic lights have been broken and I think it's bothering me because when I am in the taxi, we are waiting for the traffic light to start but it doesn't, and I think.

'Many traffic lights' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' instead of 'has'. Also, 'it's Bowser bothering me' is incorrect; it should be 'it's bothering me'. The phrase 'when I in the taxi' is missing the verb 'am'. The verb 'didn't' should be 'doesn't' to match the present tense context. These are subject-verb agreement errors and present tense issues.