Traffic— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có cấu trúc hợp lý. Ngoài ra, hãy tránh những từ không đúng hoặc không rõ nghĩa và cố gắng sử dụng các từ vựng phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.

例: Yes, there are many crosswalks near my home. For example, there is a busy crosswalk at the corner where many people cross when the traffic light turns red.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cách diễn đạt còn lộn xộn và thiếu rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng, và có cấu trúc hợp lý. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh những từ không phù hợp hoặc không đúng ngữ cảnh.

例: Yes, I would like to improve the traffic by separating the road into three lanes. For example, one lane for cars, one for buses, and one for trucks. This change could help reduce traffic congestion.

× Yes they are there, lots of the progressing normally live.

✓ Yes, they are there; lots of people normally live nearby.

The original sentence is unclear and lacks proper sentence structure. 'Lots of the progressing normally live' is not a correct phrase. It should specify 'lots of people normally live nearby' to make sense. Adding a comma after 'Yes' and a semicolon improves clarity.

× Especially in the corner, three people often crossing the Rohlwing 3 the traffic like when we have light. 1.

✓ Especially on the corner, three people often cross the road during traffic lights.

The original sentence is confusing and contains unclear words like 'Rohlwing 3 the traffic like when we have light. 1.' It should be corrected to 'three people often cross the road during traffic lights' to convey the intended meaning. Also, 'crossing' should be 'cross' to match the present tense and subject.

× Yes, I would like to change the traffic close to separate the road into three different lanes.

✓ Yes, I would like to change the traffic flow by separating the road into three different lanes.

The phrase 'traffic close to separate' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'by' to indicate the method of change. Also, 'traffic flow' is more appropriate than just 'traffic' in this context.

× For example, they could be one for cars of Ford Motor buys an attorney for trucks.

✓ For example, there could be one lane for cars, one for motorcycles, and one for trucks.

The original sentence is unclear and contains nonsensical phrases like 'Ford Motor buys an attorney.' It should clearly state the lanes for different vehicle types. The correction provides a clear and logical structure.

× They reason is that it could we prevent the traffic.

✓ The reason is that it could help prevent traffic congestion.

The original sentence has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. 'They reason' should be 'The reason,' and 'could we prevent' should be 'could help prevent.' The correction clarifies the intended meaning.