Traffic— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复，并使用正确的词汇和句式。可以先直接回答问题，然后简要说明原因。

例: Yes, there are many crosswalks around where I live because Beijing is a large city with a well-developed and complex transportation system.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，语法和词汇使用不准确。建议先明确表达自己的观点，然后用具体细节支持观点，使用连接词使句子连贯。

例: I would like to reduce the number of cars on the road because heavy traffic often causes jams and noise pollution in my area.

× Yes, I can find a lot of lot of cross works around the place where I live.

✓ Yes, I can find a lot of crosswalks around the place where I live.

“cross works” 是错误的复数形式，正确的复数形式是“crosswalks”。“crosswalk”是可数名词，复数形式需要加-s。

× I think I should be 'cause I live in Beijing, where is a very big city and the transport of foundation is very functional and is very complicated so also.

✓ I think so because I live in Beijing, which is a very big city, and the transportation system is very functional and also very complicated.

句子结构混乱，缺少连接词，且“where is a very big city”应改为“which is a very big city”。“transport of foundation”应为“transportation system”。需要调整句子顺序使其通顺。

× Is also I don't exactly know how to improve the traffic system in my area.

✓ Also, I don't exactly know how to improve the traffic system in my area.

“Is also”用法错误，应改为“Also,”作为句首副词使用。

× There do exist some problems.

✓ There do exist some problems.

该句语法正确，无需修改。

× I think the most big problem is starts the cars on the role is too much, which caused my many frequent with frequently cause traffic jams.

✓ I think the biggest problem is that the number of cars on the road is too many, which frequently causes traffic jams.

“most big”应为“biggest”，形容词最高级用法错误。“starts the cars on the role”应为“the number of cars on the road”。“my many frequent with frequently cause”语序和用词错误，应改为“frequently causes”。

× Also is very noisy.

✓ It is also very noisy.

缺少主语，应加“It”。“Also”位置调整为句中更自然。