Traffic— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve eksik cümle yapıları var. Daha doğal ve akıcı olmak için tam cümleler kurmalı, bağlaçlar kullanarak düşüncelerinizi mantıklı şekilde bağlamalısınız. Ayrıca, 'crosswalks' kelimesinin çoğul hali 'are' ile kullanılmalı ve 'people' kelimesi çoğulda 'peoples' değil 'people' olarak yazılır.

例: Yes, there are many crosswalks around my neighborhood because a lot of people use public transportation like the metro bus. Therefore, pedestrian crossings are necessary to ensure safety.

提案: Cevabınızda düşüncelerinizi daha açık ve düzenli ifade etmelisiniz. Bağlaçlar kullanarak fikirlerinizi destekleyin ve cümlelerinizi tamamlayın. Örneğin, 'If buses and metro were free, traffic congestion would decrease in the city' gibi daha net ve doğal ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz.

例: If public buses and metro services were free, more people would use them, which would reduce traffic congestion in the city.

× Yes, there is a lot of crosswalks.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of crosswalks.

The subject 'crosswalks' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number. 'There is' is used for singular nouns, while 'there are' is used for plural nouns.

× In my place.

✓ In my place,

This is a sentence fragment lacking a verb or complete thought. It should be connected to the previous or next sentence or completed to form a full sentence.

× Because.

✓ Because

'Because' is a subordinating conjunction and cannot stand alone as a sentence. It should be followed by a clause explaining the reason.

× Many peoples.

✓ Many people.

'People' is already plural and does not take an 's' at the end. 'Peoples' refers to different ethnic groups, which is not the intended meaning here.

× Using.

✓ are using

The verb 'using' alone is incomplete. It needs an auxiliary verb to form the present continuous tense, e.g., 'are using'.

× Metro Bus.

✓ the metro bus

This phrase lacks an article and a verb. Adding 'the' and integrating it into a complete sentence improves clarity.

× Something like that.

✓ Something like that.

This phrase is acceptable as a standalone expression, but in context, it would be better connected to the previous sentence for clarity.

× So there is a. Many gross.

✓ So there are many crosswalks.

'Crosswalks' is plural, so 'there are' should be used instead of 'there is'. Also, 'gross' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'crosswalks'.

× Let me think about that, uh.

✓ Let me think about that, uh,

This sentence is acceptable but would be better with a comma after 'uh' to indicate hesitation.

× Yeah, I have one idea.

✓ Yeah, I have one idea.

This sentence is grammatically correct.

× Hey.

✓ Hey,

As an interjection, 'Hey' should be followed by a comma if it leads into another sentence.

× Bus or metro van?

✓ Bus or metro van?

This is a fragment and unclear. It would be better as part of a complete sentence.

× Bus or metro free.

✓ If the bus or metro is free,

This phrase is incomplete and unclear. It should be part of a conditional sentence to express the idea properly.

× Traffic will be reduced in the cities.

✓ Traffic will be reduced in the cities.

This sentence is grammatically correct.