Traffic— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有拼写错误（crossworks 应为 crosswalks），且句子结构不够自然，建议简化句子并避免重复表达，同时增加连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, there are many crosswalks around where I live because I live in a big city. The infrastructure is well-designed for both pedestrians and vehicles.

提案: 回答中表达了观点，但句子结构稍显简单，建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并具体说明想改变的内容。

例: Yes, I live on a remote campus where traffic is heavy. Therefore, I would like to improve the traffic flow to avoid getting stuck in traffic jams.

× Yes, there are many crossworks.

✓ Yes, there are many crosswalks.

单复数错误。'crossworks' 不是正确的复数形式，正确的复数形式是 'crosswalks'。需要注意名词的正确复数形式。

× Around the place where I live because I am living in a big city and the infrastructure is perfect for both pedestrians and vehicles.

✓ Around the place where I live, the infrastructure is perfect for both pedestrians and vehicles because I am living in a big city.

句子结构错误。原句中 'Around the place where I live because...' 结构不完整，导致句意不清。应调整句子结构，使其完整且逻辑清晰。

× there are many vehicles on the streets and I don't want to be stuck in traffic jam again.

✓ there are many vehicles on the streets and I don't want to be stuck in a traffic jam again.

单复数错误。'traffic jam' 是可数名词，前面需要加不定冠词 'a'。缺少冠词导致表达不准确。