Traffic— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer does not directly address the question about crosswalks and instead talks about clothes works, which is off-topic. To improve, focus on answering the question directly with relevant information about crosswalks in your area. Also, avoid unrelated details and ensure your answer is clear and concise.

例: Yes, there are many crosswalks around where I live. They are well-marked and help pedestrians cross the streets safely, especially near schools and shopping areas.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains many hesitations and unclear phrases like 'close works'. To improve, try to speak more fluently and use clear vocabulary. Also, provide specific details about what changes you want and why, using linking words to connect your ideas.

例: Yes, I would like to improve the traffic safety in my area because it is dangerous for children to use the crosswalks. For instance, repairing the pavements and adding more traffic lights would make it safer and easier for pedestrians to cross.

× There are a lot of clothes works in my hometown.

✓ There are a lot of clothes factories in my hometown.

The phrase 'clothes works' is incorrect because 'works' is not commonly used to refer to factories or production places in this context. The correct plural noun is 'factories' or 'workshops' depending on the meaning. Using 'factories' clarifies the meaning and corrects the plural noun usage.

× the close works are repaired more easily to walk.

✓ the crosswalks are repaired more easily to walk on.

The phrase 'close works' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or misspelling of 'crosswalks'. 'Crosswalks' is the correct plural noun referring to pedestrian crossings. Also, the phrase 'to walk' should be 'to walk on' to indicate walking on the crosswalks. This correction fixes the plural noun and prepositional phrase usage.