Traffic— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误和冗余表达，例如“the My Place”应为“my place”，并且“prefer walking than driving”应为“prefer walking to driving”。此外，句子较长且结构复杂，建议简化句子并使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, there are many crosswalks around my place because I live in the city center. Most people prefer walking to driving since walking not only strengthens their body but also helps avoid traffic congestion.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“would definitely to see”应为“would definitely like to see”。建议使用更准确的表达，并且在举例时使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时避免重复表达“traffic issues”。

例: Yes, I would definitely like to see some improvements in the traffic situation in my area. For example, frequent traffic congestion causes long delays and increases pollution, which is a major problem.

× Yes, I think there are lots of crosswalks around the My Place because I live in the city center and most people prefer walking than driving because walking can not only strengthen their body but also saves time to await the road congestion.

✓ Yes, I think there are lots of crosswalks around my place because I live in the city center and most people prefer walking to driving because walking can not only strengthen their body but also save time waiting for the road congestion.

这里“prefer walking than driving”中的介词用错了，正确搭配是“prefer A to B”，即“喜欢A胜过B”。此外，“await the road congestion”用法不当，应改为“waiting for the road congestion”，表示“等待交通拥堵”。另外，动词“save”应与前面的“can”保持一致，使用原形。

× Yes, I would definitely to see some improvements of the traffic situation in my area.

✓ Yes, I would definitely like to see some improvements in the traffic situation in my area.

“would definitely to see”中“would”后面应接动词原形或带to的不定式，但这里缺少“like”动词，正确表达是“would definitely like to see”。此外，“improvements of the traffic situation”应改为“improvements in the traffic situation”，介词用法更准确。

× For example, the main issue of the traffic issues is the frequent traffic congestions which cause long delays and much pollution.

✓ For example, the main issue of the traffic issues is the frequent traffic congestion which causes long delays and much pollution.

“traffic congestions”应为不可数名词“traffic congestion”，表示交通拥堵的情况；“which cause”主语为单数“traffic congestion”，谓语动词应使用单数形式“causes”。