Traffic— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答内容丰富且结构清晰，但存在一些语法错误和用词不当，例如“horse walks”应为“crosswalks”，且句子中缺少主谓一致。建议注意语法准确性，避免用词错误，同时保持回答简洁自然。

例: Yes, there are many crosswalks around where I live because it is a busy area. The local council has invested a lot in pedestrian-friendly infrastructure to ensure safety and convenience. For instance, every major intersection has clearly marked crosswalks with traffic signs that help people cross the streets safely.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但存在用词错误，如“clearly mount crosswalks”应为“clearly marked crosswalks”，且句子结构略显重复。建议注意词汇准确性，避免重复表达，同时可以适当丰富细节使回答更自然。

例: No, I wouldn't change anything about the traffic in my area. The local council has done a great job by providing wide roads and clearly marked crosswalks, so I usually have a smooth and safe experience when traveling around the city.

× For example, there are crosswalks in every major intersection and has clearly marked horse walks with traffic signs which help people cross streets.

✓ For example, there are crosswalks in every major intersection and there are clearly marked crosswalks with traffic signs which help people cross streets.

The original sentence has a subject-verb agreement error. The phrase 'there are crosswalks' is plural, but the following verb 'has' is singular, which is incorrect. Also, 'horse walks' seems to be a typo and should be 'crosswalks'. The corrected sentence uses 'there are' to match the plural subject and corrects the typo. To improve, ensure that verbs agree in number with their subjects and check for typos that can change meaning.

× The local council has invested greatly in pedestrian friendly infrastructure to ensure safety and convenience.

✓ The local council has invested greatly in pedestrian-friendly infrastructure to ensure safety and convenience.

The phrase 'pedestrian friendly' should be hyphenated as 'pedestrian-friendly' when used as a compound adjective before a noun. This clarifies that the infrastructure is friendly to pedestrians. To improve, use hyphens to connect compound adjectives before nouns.

× The local council has invested greatly in pedestrian friendly infrastructure like wide roads and clearly mount crosswalks so I never encounter any unpleasant situations when I'm traveling around the city.

✓ The local council has invested greatly in pedestrian-friendly infrastructure like wide roads and clearly marked crosswalks so I never encounter any unpleasant situations when I'm traveling around the city.

The phrase 'clearly mount crosswalks' is incorrect. It should be 'clearly marked crosswalks' to describe crosswalks that are well indicated. Also, 'pedestrian friendly' should be hyphenated as 'pedestrian-friendly'. To improve, use correct adjectives and ensure compound adjectives are hyphenated properly.