Traffic— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答内容较为完整，但存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题。例如，“This course works”应为“This crosswalks”或“This makes”。建议注意语法准确性，避免拼写错误，同时可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, there are many crosswalks around my neighborhood, which I believe are very important. They make it safe and convenient for pedestrians to cross busy streets, especially during rush hours when many people are walking. As a result, the city feels more organized and pedestrian-friendly.

提案: 你的回答表达了清晰的观点并提供了具体例子，但最后一句话表达不够准确，“design it specific lines”应改为“design specific lanes”。建议注意句子结构的准确性，并尝试使用更多连接词来增强逻辑性。

例: Yes, I think there are too many electric scooters on the streets, which can be quite dangerous and inconvenient for pedestrians because they often move quickly and unpredictably. For example, I have witnessed several near misses between scooters and pedestrians. Therefore, I believe the government should design specific lanes or streets exclusively for electric scooters to improve safety.

× This course works make it safe and convenient for pedestrians to cross busy streets, especially during the rush hours when there are a lot of people walking.

✓ This course works to make it safe and convenient for pedestrians to cross busy streets, especially during the rush hours when there are a lot of people walking.

句中 'works make' 结构不正确，动词 'work' 后应接不定式 'to make'，表示目的。应改为 'works to make'。

× Therefore, I believe the government should design it specific lines or streets exclusively.

✓ Therefore, I believe the government should design specific lines or streets exclusively.

句中 'design it specific lines' 中的 'it' 使用错误，'design' 后直接接名词短语即可，'it' 多余且不合适，应删除。