Traffic— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve your answer by correcting vocabulary and grammar errors, and by making your response more natural and concise. Use the correct term 'crosswalks' instead of 'cross works' and clarify your meaning. Also, avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

例: Yes, there are many crosswalks in my area because it is usually crowded with both pedestrians and vehicles. These crosswalks help people cross the street safely and reduce the risk of accidents, especially during busy hours.

提案: Make your answer clearer and more structured by correcting grammar and vocabulary mistakes. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Specify the problem and your suggestion clearly and avoid vague phrases like 'and so on'.

例: Yes, the traffic in my area is often terrible due to rickshaw taxis and the presence of temples. Therefore, I think there should be a dedicated lane for rickshaws so that cars can move more easily.

× Yes, there are many cross works around wildlife because the areas where usually very crowded with both pedestrians and vehicles.

✓ Yes, there are many crosswalks around wildlife because the areas are usually very crowded with both pedestrians and vehicles.

The word 'cross works' is incorrect; the correct plural form is 'crosswalks' (a compound noun). Also, 'where' should be 'are' to correctly link the subject 'areas' with the adjective 'crowded'. This is a singular/plural and verb agreement issue.

× These cross works helps people to cross the street safely and reduce the risk of accident especially during busy hours.

✓ These crosswalks help people to cross the street safely and reduce the risk of accidents especially during busy hours.

The subject 'crosswalks' is plural, so the verb should be 'help' not 'helps'. Also, 'accident' should be plural 'accidents' because it refers to risk in general. This is a subject-verb agreement and singular/plural issue.

× Yes, certainly, because the traffic is horrible in our place area because of rickshaw taxi and temples and so on.

✓ Yes, certainly, because the traffic is horrible in our area due to rickshaw taxis, temples, and so on.

The phrase 'our place area' is awkward and incorrect; 'our area' is better. Also, 'because of' is repeated unnecessarily. 'Rickshaw taxi' should be plural 'rickshaw taxis' to match the context. This is a sentence structure and singular/plural issue.

× So I think there should be a lane for them so that cars can go move every easily.

✓ So I think there should be a lane for them so that cars can move more easily.

The phrase 'can go move every easily' is incorrect. 'Can move more easily' is the correct modal verb usage and adverb placement. 'Every' is incorrect here; 'more' is the proper comparative adverb. This is a modal verb usage and adverb placement issue.