Traffic— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答缺乏连贯性，句子结构不完整，且词汇使用不准确。建议回答时先给出明确的主题句，然后用具体细节支持，避免重复和语法错误。

例: Yes, there are many crosswalks around my neighborhood. For example, there is one in front of my neighbor's house, and they are usually spaced about 100 meters apart, which makes it convenient for pedestrians to cross safely.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议先明确表达想法，再用具体原因或例子支持，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I would like to improve the roads in my area because the current traffic rules are confusing, which causes traffic jams and makes it difficult for vehicles to move smoothly.

× Yes, there are so many crosswalks in my cities.

✓ Yes, there are so many crosswalks in my city.

这里的“cities”应为单数“city”，因为说话者指的是自己居住的一个地方。复数形式不符合语境。

× In front of my neighbor.

✓ In front of my neighbor's house.

句子缺少谓语和完整结构，导致表达不完整。应补充完整信息使句子完整。

× I think there are many crosswords almost 100 meters beside between each other.

✓ I think there are many crosswalks almost 100 meters apart from each other.

句子结构混乱，词语使用错误（crosswords应为crosswalks），介词搭配不当。应调整词语和结构使句意清晰。

× It can it came the same thing.

✓ They can serve the same purpose.

句子语法混乱，缺乏主谓一致和正确表达。应重构句子表达清楚意思。

× I think maybe the road has to be changed.

✓ I think maybe the road has to be changed.

此句无明显语法错误，符合情态动词用法。

× I think maybe the road have to be change because many of these rules have marched so that the vehicles be under the vehicle on the hard to move.

✓ I think maybe the road has to be changed because many of these rules have been broken, so the vehicles find it hard to move.

“road have”应为“road has”，主谓不一致；“change”应为过去分词“changed”；“have marched”应为“have been broken”；句子结构混乱，需调整动词形式和句子结构。