Traffic— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh dùng các câu không chính xác về ngữ pháp và nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề, sau đó giải thích chi tiết hơn về tình hình giao thông và việc thiếu vạch qua đường.

例: No, there are not many crosswalks in my city. Instead, most pedestrian crossings are located near traffic lights, so people usually have to walk to these spots to cross the road safely.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu chủ đề và giải thích cụ thể về vấn đề giao thông bạn muốn thay đổi. Tránh sử dụng các cụm từ không phù hợp hoặc không rõ nghĩa.

例: Yes, I would like to improve the traffic situation because there are many traffic jams, especially in the evenings. This causes a lot of delays and makes commuting very stressful.

× No, there are not a lot of crosswalks around my city.

✓ No, there are not a lot of crosswalks around my city.

The sentence is correct in terms of singular and plural usage. 'Crosswalks' is plural and correctly used with 'are'. No correction needed.

× It's always nearby traffic lights.

✓ It's always near traffic lights.

The preposition 'nearby' is an adjective or adverb and should not be used directly before a noun without a verb. The correct preposition to indicate proximity is 'near'. So, 'near traffic lights' is correct.

× So if you want to cross the road you have to go near traffic lights.

✓ So if you want to cross the road, you have to go near the traffic lights.

A comma is needed after the conditional clause 'if you want to cross the road' to separate it from the main clause. Also, 'the traffic lights' is more appropriate because it refers to specific traffic lights mentioned earlier.

× Oh traffic in my country is so crazy, there are so many traffic jam in the evening or in just hours so I quit.

✓ Oh, traffic in my country is so crazy, there are so many traffic jams in the evening or at certain hours, so I quit.

'Traffic jam' is countable in this context and should be plural 'traffic jams' when referring to many. Also, 'in just hours' is unclear; 'at certain hours' is more natural. Commas are added for clarity.

× This problem can be dating guys in near future.

✓ This problem can be solved in the near future.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'Dating guys' is unrelated and incorrect here. The intended meaning is likely that the problem can be addressed or solved soon. 'In the near future' is the correct phrase.