Traffic— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中表达不够自然，句子结构重复且有语法错误，建议简化句子并使用更准确的表达，同时避免冗余。

例: Yes, there are many crosswalks around my neighborhood. They help pedestrians cross safely and make it easier for buses to stop at designated points.

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法和表达存在错误，建议先明确回答，再用连词连接具体理由，且用词更准确。

例: I don't think any changes are needed in my area because there are many transportation options, such as the MRT station, bus stops, and minibuses, which make traveling convenient.

× I can definitely say that every place will have a lot of crosswalks because you have to make it more convenient for the bus and the people, and this can allow the people more safety.

✓ I can definitely say that every place will have a lot of crosswalks because you have to make it more convenient for the bus and the people, and this can allow the people to be safer.

原句中“allow the people more safety”结构不正确，动词allow后面应接动词不定式或名词短语。这里应改为“allow the people to be safer”，表示“让人们更安全”。

× Well, if the area which nearly in my hometown, I think there is no, there is no need to change because I think because there are MDR station, the bus station and even the minibus, that is quite a lot of transportation tips.

✓ Well, if the area is near my hometown, I think there is no need to change because there are MDR stations, the bus station, and even minibuses; that is quite a lot of transportation options.

原句结构混乱，缺少谓语动词，且表达不清晰。应补充谓语“is”，将“nearly”改为“near”，并将“tips”改为“options”更符合语境。同时复数形式和标点也需调整。