Traffic— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer sound more natural and confident. Also, give a clear topic sentence and add specific details using linking words to make your answer more effective and coherent.

例: Yes, there are many crosswalks in my hometown because people enjoy walking in this area. For example, the local government has installed several pedestrian crossings near parks and schools to ensure safety.

提案: Avoid repeating the same idea and filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words to add specific reasons or suggestions to support your opinion, making your answer more structured and detailed.

例: I would like the traffic to be less crowded because it causes delays during rush hours. Therefore, I suggest that more people use public transport, which can reduce the number of cars on the road and improve traffic flow.

× Yeah, we have a lot of crosswalks around the, uh, my hometown, uh, people like to, uh, go for a walk or walk on this area.

✓ Yeah, we have a lot of crosswalks around my hometown. People like to go for a walk or walk in this area.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'this area'. The correct preposition to indicate location within an area is 'in'. Also, the phrase 'around the, uh, my hometown' is redundant; 'around my hometown' is sufficient and clearer.

× I think I will advise people to use public transport.

✓ I think I would advise people to use public transport.

The modal verb 'will' is used for definite future actions, but here the speaker is expressing a hypothetical or polite intention, so 'would' is more appropriate to indicate a conditional or polite suggestion.