Traffic— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，存在语法错误和用词不当，如“Yes they are”应为“Yes, there are”，以及“busy traffic in every day”应为“busy traffic every day”。建议注意语法准确性，使用更自然的表达方式，并避免冗余。

例: Yes, there are many crosswalks around where I live because it is a big city with heavy traffic every day. These crosswalks help pedestrians, especially workers, to cross the roads safely.

提案: 回答中存在词汇错误和表达不清，如“apart the road to workers and Vikings and cars”不符合英语表达习惯，且“Vikings”显然是错误词汇。建议使用正确词汇，表达清晰具体，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

例: I would like to separate the roads for pedestrians, cyclists, and cars because sharing the same road can be dangerous for everyone.

× Yes they are.

✓ Yes, there are.

这里的回答是对“Are there a lot of crosswalks”的肯定，应该用“There are”表示存在，而不是用“they are”，因为“they”指代不明确且不符合句意。

× it has a busy traffic in every day

✓ it has busy traffic every day

“traffic”是不可数名词，前面不需要加不定冠词“a”，而且“in every day”应改为“every day”，表示每天。

× I want to apart the road to workers and Vikings and cars

✓ I want to separate the road for workers, bikers, and cars

“apart”用法错误，应该用“separate”表示分开；“to workers and Vikings and cars”中的“to”不合适，应该用“for”；“Vikings”应为“bikers”，即骑自行车的人。

× because I think the road they all use is dangerous.

✓ because I think the road they all use is dangerous.

该句语法正确，无需修改。