Traffic— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有一些语法错误和用词不当，比如“Crosswords”应为“crosswalks”，“it ensure”应为“it ensures”。建议注意主谓一致和词汇准确性。此外，回答可以更简洁自然，避免重复表达。

例: Yes, there are many crosswalks around my neighborhood. They are very important because they help keep pedestrians safe, especially since there are several schools nearby. This ensures that children can cross the streets safely after school.

提案: 回答中存在表达不清和语法错误，如“the mission from school”不明确，“are filled of”应为“are filled with”。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，使表达更流畅自然。

例: Yes, I would like to improve the traffic situation because the road near my home is very narrow. During school pick-up times, many parents park their cars there, causing traffic jams. Therefore, I think widening the road would help ease the congestion.

× Crosswords are essential for a city's infrastructure because it ensure pedestrians safe.

✓ Crosswalks are essential for a city's infrastructure because they ensure pedestrians' safety.

“Crosswords”应为“crosswalks”，表示人行横道，复数形式；“it ensure”主语复数应使用“they ensure”；“pedestrians safe”应改为“pedestrians' safety”，表示“行人的安全”，需用名词所有格。

× Especially the place I lived there were lots of schools nearby so it is a very important to protect the kids who are after school.

✓ Especially the place where I lived, there were lots of schools nearby, so it was very important to protect the kids who were after school.

“the place I lived”应加“where”引导定语从句；“it is a very important”时态应与过去时间一致，改为“it was very important”；“kids who are after school”应改为“kids who were after school”，保持过去时态一致。

× Actually there is only a very narrow path in the place I live.

✓ Actually, there is only a very narrow path in the place where I live.

“the place I live”缺少关系副词“where”引导定语从句，表示“我住的地方”。

× And especially when the students, the mission from school, the path, the road are filled of the parents who came here to pick up their children.

✓ And especially when the students are dismissed from school, the path and the road are filled with the parents who come here to pick up their children.

“the mission from school”应为“the students are dismissed from school”，表示学生放学；“filled of”应改为“filled with”，表示“充满”；“came”应改为“come”，保持一般现在时态。

× So there are many traffic jams there.

✓ So there are many traffic jams there.

该句无语法错误，符合语法规则。

× So I would like to broaden the way there.

✓ So I would like to broaden the road there.

“broaden the way”表达不自然，通常用“broaden the road”表示“拓宽道路”。