Traffic— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用具体细节支持。例如，明确说明有多少人行横道以及它们如何帮助提高道路安全。

例: Yes, there are many crosswalks near where I live. They help improve road safety by allowing pedestrians to cross the street safely.

提案: 回答中表达不清且有语法错误，建议直接说明想改变的具体内容，并用连词连接句子，使表达更连贯。例如，说明希望增加哪些设施以及这些设施如何提高安全性。

例: I would like to add more traffic lights and pedestrian bridges to improve safety. These facilities can help people cross the road more safely.

× Yes and there are many coursework are nearby my I'm living areas and I remember this help to reduce this to Rd. safety.

✓ Yes, there are many crosswalks near the area where I live, and I believe this helps to improve road safety.

原句结构混乱，存在重复动词“are”，且“coursework”用词错误，应为“crosswalks”。此外，“my I'm living areas”表达不清，应改为“the area where I live”。建议简化句子结构，使表达更清晰。

× Yes and there are many coursework are nearby my I'm living areas and I remember this help to reduce this to Rd. safety.

✓ Yes, there are many crosswalks near the area where I live, and I believe this helps to improve road safety.

原句中“nearby my I'm living areas”中的介词使用错误，应使用“near”加地点名词短语，且“my I'm living areas”表达不规范。建议使用“near the area where I live”更准确。

× The thing I like to drink about the traffic areas, it will be maybe adding more facility to reduce the safety concern about the Cross Road and make people more safety when they cross the road.

✓ What I would like to change about the traffic in my area is maybe adding more facilities to reduce safety concerns at crosswalks and make people safer when they cross the road.

原句中“like to drink”用词错误，应为“would like to change”。“it will be maybe adding”表达不规范，建议用“is maybe adding”。“facility”应为复数“facilities”，且“make people more safety”中“safety”应为形容词“safer”。

× The thing I like to drink about the traffic areas, it will be maybe adding more facility to reduce the safety concern about the Cross Road and make people more safety when they cross the road.

✓ What I would like to change about the traffic in my area is maybe adding more facilities to reduce safety concerns at crosswalks and make people safer when they cross the road.

“more safety”用法错误，应使用比较级形容词“safer”来修饰“people”。此外，“facility”应为复数形式“facilities”。

× Yes and there are many coursework are nearby my I'm living areas and I remember this help to reduce this to Rd. safety.

✓ Yes, there are many crosswalks near the area where I live, and I believe this helps to improve road safety.

“coursework”是不可数名词，且与语境不符，应改为复数名词“crosswalks”。同时，“areas”应与前文保持一致，使用单数“area”更合适。