Traffic— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在一些语法错误和拼写错误，如“crossworks”应为“crosswalks”，“in campus”应为“on campus”。句子结构不够连贯，表达不够自然。建议注意单词拼写，使用正确的介词，并且避免句子碎片，保持句子完整和流畅。

例: Yes, there are many crosswalks around where I live because I currently live on campus. The streets are designed to protect pedestrians, especially students. I think this is a positive feature because it ensures safety for everyone.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“at my compass”应为“on my campus”，“less frequency”应为“low frequency”。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，避免口语化缩写如“wanna”，并且提供更具体的细节来支持观点。

例: One thing I would like to change about the traffic is the minibus service on my campus. Currently, the buses run infrequently, so I often have to wait a long time to get to the library. I hope the school can increase the number of minibuses to make transportation more convenient.

× Definitely, there are many crossworks around the place where I live because I'm currently living in campus, so there are a lot of streets that are designed to protect pedestrians, especially the students.

✓ Definitely, there are many crosswalks around the place where I live because I'm currently living on campus, so there are a lot of streets that are designed to protect pedestrians, especially the students.

单复数错误：'crossworks' 应为复数形式 'crosswalks'，因为指多个斑马线。建议注意名词的单复数形式，复数名词通常需要加-s或-es。

× Definitely, there are many crossworks around the place where I live because I'm currently living in campus, so there are a lot of streets that are designed to protect pedestrians, especially the students.

✓ Definitely, there are many crosswalks around the place where I live because I'm currently living on campus, so there are a lot of streets that are designed to protect pedestrians, especially the students.

介词使用错误：'living in campus' 应改为 'living on campus'，因为英语中表示在校园内通常用介词 'on'。建议熟悉固定搭配的介词用法。

× It's a very good. Phenomenon and I really enjoying.

✓ It's a very good phenomenon and I really enjoy it.

形容词和动词形式错误：'very good.' 后不应断句，'Phenomenon' 应与前句连贯；'I really enjoying' 应为 'I really enjoy'，因为 'enjoy' 是动词，需用一般现在时。建议注意句子完整性和动词时态。

× There is one thing I want to change is about the minibus.

✓ One thing I want to change is about the minibuses.

单复数错误：'minibus' 应为复数 'minibuses'，因为后文提到频率少，暗示多辆车。建议根据语境判断名词单复数。

× At my compass there are less frequency, so I wanna school could provide more minibuses to serve.

✓ At my campus there is less frequency, so I want the school to provide more minibuses to serve.

介词和表达错误：'At my compass' 应为 'At my campus'；'less frequency' 应用 'there is less frequency'，频率是不可数名词；'wanna school could provide' 语法错误，应为 'I want the school to provide'。建议注意单词拼写和句子结构。

× For example when I want to go library I also need to wait for a long time.

✓ For example, when I want to go to the library, I also need to wait for a long time.

介词和冠词错误：'go library' 应为 'go to the library'，动词 'go' 后需加介词 'to'，'library' 前需加定冠词 'the'。建议熟悉动词搭配和冠词用法。