Traffic— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'inter intersection' và 'This course' nên là 'intersections' và 'These crosswalks'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi phát âm hoặc từ vựng sai. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, there are quite a few crosswalks around where I live, especially near schools and busy intersections. These crosswalks make it much safer for pedestrians to cross the street, which is very important in my neighborhood.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'like to improvement' nên là 'like to improve', 'peak hour' nên là 'peak hours', và câu cuối bị bỏ dở. Bạn nên hoàn thành câu trả lời với cấu trúc rõ ràng, sử dụng liên từ để nối ý và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

例: Yes, I would definitely like to improve the traffic situation in my area. The main issue is the frequent congestion during peak hours, which causes long delays and increases pollution. Therefore, introducing better public transportation options and encouraging people to use them could help reduce traffic problems.

× Yes, there are quite a few crosswalks around where I live, especially near school and busy inter intersection.

✓ Yes, there are quite a few crosswalks around where I live, especially near schools and busy intersections.

The nouns 'school' and 'intersection' should be plural to match the context of multiple locations. Using singular forms here is incorrect because it implies only one school and one intersection, which is unlikely in this context.

× This course will make it much safer for pedestrian to cross the street, which is important in a poor neighborhood like Mike.

✓ This course will make it much safer for pedestrians to cross the street, which is important in a poor neighborhood like Mike.

The noun 'pedestrian' should be plural 'pedestrians' because it refers to people in general, not just one person. Using singular form here is incorrect when referring to a group.

× Yes, I would definitely like to improvement in the traffic situation in my area.

✓ Yes, I would definitely like to see improvement in the traffic situation in my area.

The verb 'like' should be followed by a verb in the base form or a noun. 'Like to improvement' is incorrect because 'improvement' is a noun and needs a verb like 'see' before it to make sense.

× Introducing better public transportation option and encouraging.

✓ Introducing better public transportation options and encouraging.

The noun 'option' should be plural 'options' because it refers to multiple possible improvements. Using singular form here is incorrect in this context.