Traffic— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the placewhere you live?
受験者
Yes, there are quite a few crosswords around where I live, especially near schools and my house. These crosswords make it much easier and safer for pedestrians to cross the streets.
試験官
Is there anything you would like to change aboutthe traffic in your area?
受験者
Yes, I would like to train about the motorbike in my area because there have so much motorbikes and is not friendly can harm the environment.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the place where you live?
スコア: 70.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi về từ vựng và chính tả, ví dụ như từ 'crosswords' thay vì 'crosswalks'. Bạn nên sử dụng từ chính xác và tránh lỗi chính tả để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm một câu nối để làm rõ hơn ý của mình.
例: Yes, there are quite a few crosswalks around where I live, especially near schools and my house. These crosswalks make it much easier and safer for pedestrians to cross the streets, so people feel more comfortable walking in the area.
Is there anything you would like to change about the traffic in your area?
スコア: 50.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng, từ vựng phù hợp và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.
例: Yes, I would like to improve the traffic situation by reducing the number of motorbikes in my area because there are too many, and they cause pollution which harms the environment.
文法
× Yes, there are quite a few crosswords around where I live, especially near schools and my house.
✓ Yes, there are quite a few crosswalks around where I live, especially near schools and my house.
The word 'crosswords' is incorrect in this context; the correct plural form is 'crosswalks' which refers to pedestrian crossings. 'Crosswords' refers to word puzzles, so it is a vocabulary error related to plural form usage.
× Yes, I would like to train about the motorbike in my area because there have so much motorbikes and is not friendly can harm the environment.
✓ Yes, I would like to have training about motorbikes in my area because there are so many motorbikes and they are not friendly and can harm the environment.
Several plural and singular issues: 'there have' should be 'there are' for existence; 'so much motorbikes' should be 'so many motorbikes' because 'motorbikes' is countable; 'is not friendly' should be 'they are not friendly' to agree with plural subject; also, 'train about' is incorrect, 'have training about' or 'receive training about' is better. These corrections fix subject-verb agreement and countable noun usage.
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