Traffic— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변에서 단어 선택과 문장 구조에 주의가 필요합니다. 예를 들어, 'close works'는 'crosswalks'로 수정해야 하며, 'busy interactions days'는 의미가 불분명하므로 'busy intersections'로 바꾸는 것이 좋습니다. 또한, 문장 간 연결이 자연스럽지 않고, 문법 오류가 있습니다. 좀 더 명확하고 자연스러운 문장 구성을 연습하세요.

例: Yes, there are quite a few crosswalks around where I live, especially near schools and busy intersections. Crosswalks make it much safer for pedestrians to cross the street, which is important in a bustling neighborhood like mine. For example, I often use the crosswalk near the local market to avoid traffic hazards.

提案: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고, 일부 표현이 이해하기 어렵습니다. 예를 들어, 'Increasing better public transportation option'은 'Improving public transportation options'로, 'encouraging calculate code'는 의미가 불분명하므로 명확한 표현으로 바꾸어야 합니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: Yes, I would definitely like to see improvements in the traffic situation in my area. Currently, there is a lot of congestion during peak hours, which causes delays and increases pollution. Improving public transportation options and encouraging people to use them could significantly reduce the number of vehicles on the road and make commuting easier.

× Yes, there are quite a few close works around where I live, especially near school and busy interactions days.

✓ Yes, there are quite a few crosswalks around where I live, especially near schools and busy intersections.

'close works' is incorrect; the correct plural noun is 'crosswalks'. 'school' should be plural 'schools' to match the context of multiple locations. 'interactions days' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'busy intersections'. This error is about using correct plural forms and correct nouns.

× Crosswalks make it much safer for pedestrians to cross the street, which is important in the bustling neighborhood like mine.

✓ Crosswalks make it much safer for pedestrians to cross the street, which is important in a bustling neighborhood like mine.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'bustling neighborhood'. Since 'bustling neighborhood' is a general description, the indefinite article 'a' should be used.

× Currently there is a lot of congestion during peak hours which cause delay and increase pollution.

✓ Currently there is a lot of congestion during peak hours which causes delay and increases pollution.

The subject 'congestion' is singular, so the verbs should be 'causes' and 'increases' to agree in number. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to singular and plural forms.

× Increasing better public transportation option and encouraging calculate code in significantly reduce the number of vehicle on the road and make communicating more.

✓ Increasing better public transportation options and encouraging carpooling can significantly reduce the number of vehicles on the road and make commuting easier.

'option' should be plural 'options' to match 'better public transportation'. 'calculate code in' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo; the intended phrase is 'carpooling'. 'vehicle' should be plural 'vehicles'. 'make communicating more' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make commuting easier'. This sentence has multiple quantifier and word choice errors.