Traffic— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the placewhere you live?
受験者
No, there aren't many crosswalks near my home. It's a quiet residential area with low traffic, so pedestrian crossings are not really necessary. People usually work on the sidewalks or across the streets carefully without designated crosswalks.
試験官
Is there anything you would like to change aboutthe traffic in your area?
受験者
Yes, if I had the chance, I would definitely like to improve the traffic situation in my area. Especially during peak hours, the traffic is often very congested, which makes commuting difficult and stressful for everyone. I believe that if people follow traffic rules more strictly and avoided unnecessary driving, it would help reduce the concession significantly.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the place where you live?
スコア: 85.0提案: आपके उत्तर में विषय वाक्य स्पष्ट है और अतिरिक्त विवरण भी दिए गए हैं, लेकिन 'work on the sidewalks' वाक्यांश संदर्भ के लिए उपयुक्त नहीं है। इसे सुधारने की आवश्यकता है ताकि उत्तर अधिक प्राकृतिक और सटीक लगे।
例: No, there aren't many crosswalks near my home because it's a quiet residential area with low traffic. Therefore, pedestrian crossings are not considered necessary. People usually walk carefully on the sidewalks or cross the streets cautiously without designated crosswalks.
Is there anything you would like to change about the traffic in your area?
スコア: 80.0提案: आपके उत्तर में विचार स्पष्ट हैं, लेकिन 'concession' शब्द का उपयोग गलत है। सही शब्द 'congestion' होना चाहिए। इसके अलावा, कुछ लिंकिंग शब्दों का उपयोग करके उत्तर को और अधिक प्रवाहपूर्ण बनाया जा सकता है।
例: Yes, if I had the chance, I would definitely like to improve the traffic situation in my area. Especially during peak hours, the traffic is often very congested, which makes commuting difficult and stressful for everyone. Therefore, I believe that if people follow traffic rules more strictly and avoid unnecessary driving, it would help reduce the congestion significantly.
文法
× I believe that if people follow traffic rules more strictly and avoided unnecessary driving, it would help reduce the concession significantly.
✓ I believe that if people followed traffic rules more strictly and avoided unnecessary driving, it would help reduce the congestion significantly.
The sentence is a conditional sentence type 2, which requires the past tense in the 'if' clause. 'Follow' should be changed to 'followed' to match the past tense form. Also, 'concession' is a wrong word here; the correct word is 'congestion' which means traffic jam.
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