Traffic— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“biggest cities”应为“biggest city”，“to across the road”应为“to cross the road”。回答较为冗长且缺乏连贯的连接词，建议简化句子结构，使用恰当的连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, there are many crosswalks in my city, Shenzhen, because it is very busy. To help people cross the road safely, the government has built several pedestrian bridges and crosswalks.

提案: 回答中存在词汇使用不准确的问题，如“pollutions”应为“pollution”，“busy world”应为“busy road”或“busy area”，“bearing sound boundary”表达不清。建议使用准确的词汇，简洁表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I would like to reduce the noise pollution in my area because I live near a busy road. I hope the government can install sound barriers or take other measures to lower the noise levels.

× I am living in Shenzhen, which is the biggest cities, so the traffic is very busy, so it's not easy for some people to across the road.

✓ I am living in Shenzhen, which is the biggest city, so the traffic is very busy, so it's not easy for some people to cross the road.

这里的 'cities' 应该用单数形式 'city'，因为深圳是一个城市，不是多个城市。'biggest' 修饰单数名词时，名词也应为单数。

× it's not easy for some people to across the road.

✓ it's not easy for some people to cross the road.

动词 'across' 是介词，不能直接用作动词。这里应使用动词 'cross'，表示 '穿过'。

× So the public will build some more cross bridge.

✓ So the public will build some more cross bridges.

'cross bridge' 应为复数形式 'cross bridges'，因为表示多个人行天桥。

× I just live very close to a busy world.

✓ I just live very close to a busy road.

'world' 是 '世界' 的意思，语境中应为 'road'（道路），表示靠近繁忙的道路。

× I'd like to change annoying pollutions in my area because you know, I just live very close to a busy world.

✓ I'd like to change the annoying pollution in my area because you know, I just live very close to a busy road.

'pollutions' 是不可数名词 'pollution' 的错误复数形式，应使用单数形式。并且前面加定冠词 'the' 表示特指。

× such as bearing sound boundary or the other methods.

✓ such as building sound barriers or other methods.

'bearing sound boundary' 是错误表达，应为 'building sound barriers'，表示建造隔音屏障。并且 'the other methods' 应为 'other methods'，表示其他方法。