Traffic— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且语法错误，缺少主语和完整句子结构。建议使用完整句子并增加细节，使回答更自然流畅。

例: Yes, there are several crosswalks near my house, which make it safer for pedestrians to cross the streets.

提案: 回答过于简短且不够具体，缺少个人观点和细节。建议直接表达自己的看法，并用连接词丰富内容。

例: I would like to see better traffic management, such as more traffic lights and clearer road signs, because it would reduce accidents and improve safety.

× Near my house have some crosswalks.

✓ Near my house, there are some crosswalks.

句子中缺少了存在句型的助动词“there are”，正确表达地点存在某物时应使用“there be”结构。应在“Near my house”后加逗号，并用“there are”引出复数名词“some crosswalks”。

× I don't know, I think this is police job.

✓ I don't know, I think this is a police job.

“police job”前缺少不定冠词“a”，因为“job”是可数名词，单数形式前需要冠词。应加上“a”使表达完整正确。