Traffic— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas (e.g., "beneficial and advantageous"). Also, improve grammar and sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific examples or reasons.

例: Yes, there are many crosswalks and zebra crossings near my hometown. They help people cross the road safely, which reduces accidents significantly. For example, I often see families using these crossings to get to school or shops without any trouble.

提案: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar. Start with a direct response, then explain your ideas with linking words. Avoid vague phrases like "I will put"; instead, express your opinion or suggestion. Also, use more precise vocabulary and correct sentence forms to improve clarity.

例: Yes, I would like to see more traffic signals installed, especially at busy intersections. Additionally, adding arrow boards on road corners would help drivers navigate more easily, making travel safer and more convenient for everyone.

× There are a lot of crosswalks as well as zebra crossing near our hometown because it is very beneficial and advantageous for the people of community.

✓ There are a lot of crosswalks as well as zebra crossings near our hometown because they are very beneficial and advantageous for the people of the community.

The phrase 'zebra crossing' should be pluralized to 'zebra crossings' to match 'a lot of'. Also, 'people of community' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'community'. Additionally, 'it is' should be 'they are' to agree with the plural subject 'crosswalks and zebra crossings'. This correction addresses pluralization and article usage.

× And with the crosswalks, people safely cross the road and it reduced the accidental ratio.

✓ And with the crosswalks, people safely cross the road and it reduces the accident rate.

The verb 'reduced' is in the past tense, but the sentence is describing a general fact, so present tense 'reduces' is appropriate. Also, 'accidental ratio' is incorrect; the correct term is 'accident rate'. This correction fixes tense consistency and word choice.

× Well, I will put more and more traffic signals on the road as well as I give arrow boards on the corners of the road because with those people are conveniently and beneficially travel by Rd.

✓ Well, I will put more and more traffic signals on the road as well as give arrow boards on the corners of the road because with those, people can travel conveniently and beneficially by road.

The phrase 'I give' should be 'give' to maintain parallel structure with 'I will put'. Also, 'people are conveniently and beneficially travel' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'people can travel conveniently and beneficially'. 'Rd' should be written as 'road'. This correction addresses future tense usage, sentence structure, and word choice.