Traffic— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误和不完整的表达，如“TRA, communicate and transport”不清晰且不连贯。建议直接回答问题，并用简洁明了的句子描述情况，避免无关或模糊的内容。

例: Yes, there are many crosswalks around where I live. They help pedestrians cross the streets safely, especially in busy areas like the city center.

提案: 回答不完整且句子结构混乱，缺少连贯的逻辑和具体细节。建议回答时先明确表达想改变的内容，然后用具体原因和细节支持观点，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I would like to reduce the number of traffic accidents in my area. Although there are many crosswalks that improve safety, heavy traffic often causes dangerous situations, so better traffic management is needed.

× It's make your life hard.

✓ It makes your life hard.

句子中主语是第三人称单数"It"，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"makes"，而不是原形"make"。这是主谓一致错误，需注意动词形式的变化。

× However, the heavy traffic concentration in these areas often.

✓ However, the heavy traffic concentration in these areas is often high.

该句缺少谓语动词，导致句子结构不完整。需要补充谓语动词使句子完整，表达清晰。