Traffic— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 句子相对自然，但存在语法错误与冗余描述。注意主谓一致（例如 “local governments has” 应为 “local government has” 或 “local governments have”），以及拼写错误（“speed limited” 应为 “speed limit”）。可以用一到两句的主题句直接回答，然后用一到两句有逻辑连接词的具体细节补充，避免重复信息。

例: Yes, there are many crosswalks near my home because a private school is nearby. As a result, the local government has added extra crossings and clear speed-limit signs to improve safety, and crossing guards help children during school hours.

提案: 回答表达了观点但存在严重拼写和用词错误（如 “no science” 应为 “no signs”），数字写法应为英文词或 digit consistency，结构稍混乱。建议先直接给出简短主题句，再用 because + 具体后果补充，并提出可行的改进措施以增强内容具体性。

例: I would like more traffic signs at intersections because many junctions currently lack clear signage, which confuses pedestrians. Installing stop signs or pedestrian signals at busy crossings would make walking much safer.

× So local governments has installed extra crosswalks and the traffic signs for safety.

✓ So local governments have installed extra crosswalks and traffic signs for safety.

句子主语是复数“local governments”，谓语动词应使用复数形式“have”。原句使用了单数形式“has”，造成主谓不一致。建议：主语为复数时（如 government s、people、children 等），动词用复数形式（have/are）。

× For example, during school hours there are crossing guards and the clear speed limited signs to slow down cars.

✓ For example, during school hours there are crossing guards and clear speed limit signs to slow down cars.

短语“the clear speed limited signs”中有错误：1) “the”在这里不必要且使短语听起来自然度下降；2) “speed limited”不是正确的搭配，应为“speed limit”作为名词短语修饰“signs”。因此改为“clear speed limit signs”。建议：注意固定搭配（speed limit），并在列举一般事物时省略不必要的定冠词。

× I think 1 important change would be to install more traffic signs at the intersections because many junctions currently have no science which causes a lot of confusion for pedestrians.

✓ I think one important change would be to install more traffic signs at the intersections because many junctions currently have no signs, which causes a lot of confusion for pedestrians.

原句有两处问题：1) 数量词“1”应写为单词“one”；2) 单词“science”拼写错误，应为“signs”。此外在“have no signs, which causes”之间需加逗号以分隔主句和非限制性定语从句。建议：写正式句子时把数字写成单词（尤其在句首或小数字时），并检查拼写以确保使用正确词汇。

× So local governments has installed extra crosswalks and the traffic signs for safety.

✓ So local governments have installed extra crosswalks and traffic signs for safety.

（重复项提示）句子中主语为复数“local governments”，谓语应为复数“have”。确保主语与动词在人称和数上保持一致。

× Are there a lot of crosswalks around the placewhere you live?

✓ Are there a lot of crosswalks around the place where you live?

原句“placewhere”应为空格分开为“place where”。此外“crosswalks”为复数，用法正确。建议注意单词之间的空格和复合结构的分割。