Traffic— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap daha net ve dilbilgisi açısından doğru olmalı. 'Crossword' yerine 'crosswalks' kullanılmalı; cümlenin yapılandırılması, fiil zamanları ve çoğul-tekil uyumuna dikkat edilmeli. Ayrıca ikinci cümlede neden güvende hissettiğinizi kısa bir açıklama ekleyin. Bağlaçlar (for example, because) kullanarak tutarlı bir akış sağlayın. Cümle sayısını 2-3 cümle ile sınırlayın.

例: Yes, there are many crosswalks in my neighborhood because the city government repaints and maintains them regularly. For example, the marked crossings at the main intersections make me feel safer when walking to the store.

提案: Cevabınızda ne demek istediğiniz net değil ve dilbilgisi hataları var. 'Limit of speed can be increased' yerine açıkça hangi hız sınırı ve neden artırılmasını istediğinizi belirtin. Ayrıca konuşma sırasında doldurucu kelimeleri ('uh') azaltın. Bir neden sunun ve sonuca bağlamak için bağlaç kullanın. Toplam 2-3 cümleyle açık ve mantıklı bir görüş verin.

例: I would slightly raise the speed limit on empty suburban roads because keeping drivers unnecessarily slow often causes congestion and frustration. However, I would keep lower limits near schools and busy intersections to ensure safety.

× Yes, there are a lot of crossword on my city government set the road regularly and it contribute to prevent traffic congestion.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of crosswalks in my city. The government maintains the roads regularly and it contributes to preventing traffic congestion.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'crossword' should be plural 'crosswalks' (singular/plural). 'on my city' is incorrect preposition and noun choice; 'in my city' is correct. 'set the road regularly' is ungrammatical; replace with 'The government maintains the roads regularly' (sentence structure and verb choice). 'it contribute' should be 'it contributes' to match subject-verb agreement. Use 'preventing' (gerund) after 'contributes to'. Suggested improvements: use correct plural forms, use appropriate prepositions, ensure subject and verb agree, and use gerund after 'contribute to'.

× I feel safe when I walk on the road.

✓ I feel safe when I walk on the road.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses the present tense appropriately to describe a general, habitual feeling. No changes needed.

× I think limit of speed can be increased because when the road empty, everybody must be, uh, low speed with their car.

✓ I think the speed limit could be increased because when the road is empty, drivers often drive slowly.

Problems and fixes: 'limit of speed' is incorrect word order; use 'the speed limit' (noun order). 'can be increased' is acceptable but 'could be increased' is more tentative — remains modal verb choice. 'when the road empty' needs the verb 'is' (there is a missing verb). 'everybody must be, uh, low speed with their car' is ungrammatical: use 'drivers often drive slowly' to convey intended meaning. Also 'low speed' should be adverb 'slowly'. Suggestions: correct noun order, include the appropriate auxiliary verb, choose the correct modal to match nuance, and use adverbial form for manner verbs.

× It's affect traffic congestion.

✓ It affects traffic congestion.

The subject 'it' requires the third person singular present tense 'affects' rather than 'affect'. This is a subject-verb agreement within the present tense. Suggestion: for simple present with third person singular subject, add -s to the verb.