Traffic— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更简洁、结构更清晰，并使用连接词来组织句子。例如先给出直接回答的主题句，然后用一两个具体细节支持。注意语法错误（如多余的“they”）和词序，使用更恰当的词汇表达“保证安全”。

例: Yes, there are many crosswalks near where I live. They make it easy and safe for pedestrians to cross the road, especially near schools and shopping areas, so people don’t have to jaywalk.

提案: 回答需更有条理并避免重复，先给出明确的观点，再用具体原因和可能的解决办法来支持。注意表达原因时的逻辑与时态，避免冗长或不连贯的从句。

例: Yes. I would adjust the traffic light timing during rush hour to reduce waiting times. For example, extending the green phase on main roads during morning and evening peaks could ease congestion and shorten queues.

× Yes, there are a lot of crosswalks around my city so that it is convenient for pedestrians when they want to cross the road and they it can also guarantee their safety.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of crosswalks around my city, so it is convenient for pedestrians when they want to cross the road, and they can also be guaranteed safety.

问题类型：主谓一致与句子结构混乱。原句中“they it can also guarantee their safety”出现多余代词“it”并且动词结构不正确。应去掉“it”，并调整成被动或主动且主语与动词一致的结构。例如改为“they can also be guaranteed safety”或“this can also guarantee their safety”。建议：注意不要插入多余代词，确保主语（they/this）与后续动词形式一致，并用逗号分隔并列的句子成分以让句子更清晰。

× Yes, of course. The most important I think is to change the traffic light when especially when in the rush hour because the long traffic light you need may be may be less the waiting time and cause the traffic jam badly.

✓ Yes, of course. I think the most important thing is to change the timing of the traffic lights, especially during rush hour, because shorter red-light times can reduce waiting time and lessen traffic jams.

问题类型：现在时态与句子结构错误。原句中结构混乱，时态和词序不当（如“The most important I think is to change the traffic light when especially when in the rush hour”），并有重复短语“may be may be”与不自然表达“long traffic light you need may be less the waiting time”。改为现在时的一般陈述“is to change the timing... especially during rush hour”，并用“can reduce... and lessen...”表达结果关系。建议：1) 把句子主干先说清楚（主语+谓语+宾语）；2) 避免重复短语；3) 用恰当的词汇（timing 而不是单个 traffic light；reduce/lessen 表示减少）。