Shopping— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more precise and avoid confusing phrases like 'sharp public person' and 'buy something you'. Keep your answer natural and concise, directly addressing the question with clear reasons.

例: Yes, I really enjoy shopping because I like exploring new products. I usually shop once a week to buy things I need or want.

提案: Your answer covers the main idea but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use linking words properly and avoid redundancy. Also, correct words like 'becaused' to 'because' and 'necessery' to 'necessary'.

例: Yes, I often compare prices because sometimes the same product is cheaper at another store. Moreover, bargaining can help me get a better deal, so comparing prices is necessary.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases like 'buy us something particular thing'. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more precise.

例: Yes, I am a very choosy person and often take a long time to decide what to buy. However, if someone accompanies me, it becomes easier to make a choice.

提案: Your answer conveys the main idea but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use singular/plural forms correctly and avoid repetition. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

例: No, I don't think expensive products are always better. It depends on the quality because sometimes expensive items are made of poor materials and can break easily.

× Yes, I love shopping a lot because I'm a sharp public person and during every week I tend to buy something you.

✓ Yes, I love shopping a lot because I'm a sharp public person and during every week I tend to buy something.

The pronoun 'you' at the end of the sentence is incorrect and unnecessary. It should be removed to make the sentence grammatically correct and clear.

× Yes, I often compare prices when I'm doing shopping becaused sometimes the same thing is available at a cheap price at the another shop and moreover, sometimes bargaining may help in comparing prices.

✓ Yes, I often compare prices when I'm shopping because sometimes the same thing is available at a cheaper price at another shop and moreover, sometimes bargaining may help in comparing prices.

The phrase 'doing shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'shopping'. 'Becaused' is a typo and should be 'because'. 'At a cheap price' should be 'at a cheaper price' to indicate comparison. 'The another shop' is incorrect; it should be 'another shop' without 'the'.

× So these are the reasons why comparing prices is necessery.

✓ So these are the reasons why comparing prices is necessary.

The word 'necessery' is a misspelling. The correct spelling is 'necessary'.

× Oh yes, I'm very choosy person and I take a lot of time to buy us something particular thing.

✓ Oh yes, I'm a very choosy person and I take a lot of time to buy a particular thing.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'very choosy person' and before 'particular thing'. Also, 'us' is incorrect here and should be removed.

× But uh, if someone is giving company for me, then it would be easier for me to buy the same thing.

✓ But uh, if someone is keeping me company, then it would be easier for me to buy the same thing.

The phrase 'giving company for me' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'keeping me company'.

× No I don't think so. It depends on the products quality.

✓ No, I don't think so. It depends on the product's quality.

'Products quality' should be 'product's quality' to show possession and singular form.

× Sometime the expensive products also get destroyed because they are not a very good material.

✓ Sometimes the expensive products also get destroyed because they are not made of very good material.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes'. 'Not a very good material' is incorrect; it should be 'not made of very good material' to be grammatically correct.

× So I think that prices, price doesn't matter while comparing A productive.

✓ So I think that price doesn't matter while comparing a product.

The phrase 'prices, price' is confusing; it should be singular 'price'. 'A productive' is incorrect; it should be 'a product'.