Shopping— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá ngắn và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như cách dùng từ chưa chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và bổ sung thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

例: Yes, I really enjoy shopping, both online and at local stores like the River Store. I like the convenience of online shopping, but I also enjoy seeing products in person before buying.

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời trở nên tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về lý do bạn so sánh giá cả.

例: Yes, I always compare prices when I shop because it helps me find the best deals. By doing this, I can save money and make better decisions about what to buy.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và thêm các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý của bạn.

例: It depends on the situation. I find it difficult to choose when buying expensive items like necklaces or jewelry, but I usually have no trouble deciding when purchasing cheaper products.

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp lý do cụ thể cho quan điểm của bạn.

例: No, I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones. It depends on the situation because sometimes cheaper products can be just as good and more affordable for my budget.

× I love both of this.

✓ I love both of these.

The phrase 'both of this' is incorrect because 'both' refers to two items and should be followed by a plural demonstrative pronoun 'these' instead of the singular 'this'. Suggestion: Use 'both of these' when referring to two items.

× Special yes, I think comparing prices when shopping is the important thing that everyone do an.

✓ Especially yes, I think comparing prices when shopping is the important thing that everyone does.

The word 'Special' is incorrect here; it should be 'Especially' to express emphasis. Also, 'everyone do an' is incorrect because 'everyone' is singular and requires the verb 'does'. Suggestion: Use 'especially' for emphasis and ensure subject-verb agreement with 'everyone does'.

× When I compare the price, I can know where is cheaper so I can. Disid easily.

✓ When I compare the prices, I can know where it is cheaper so I can decide easily.

The sentence is fragmented and has missing words. 'Price' should be plural 'prices' when comparing multiple items. 'Where is cheaper' should be 'where it is cheaper'. 'Disid' is a misspelling of 'decide'. Suggestion: Use complete sentences with correct word forms and spelling.

× Specially it depends on the situation.

✓ Especially, it depends on the situation.

The word 'Specially' is incorrect in this context; the correct adverb is 'Especially' to indicate emphasis. Suggestion: Use 'especially' when emphasizing a point.

× It is really difficult for me to make choice when I'm by the expensive things like the accessory like necklace or the appraisal it,

✓ It is really difficult for me to make a choice when I'm buying expensive things like accessories such as necklaces or appraisal items,

'Make choice' requires an article 'a' to become 'make a choice'. 'By' is incorrect; it should be 'buying'. 'Accessory' should be plural 'accessories' when referring to more than one. 'Appraisal it' is unclear; likely meant 'appraisal items'. Suggestion: Use articles correctly, correct verb forms, and pluralize nouns when appropriate.

× but I would never have the difficult when I'm a choice when I buy the cheaper things.

✓ but I would never have difficulty when I make a choice to buy cheaper things.

'Have the difficult' is incorrect; it should be 'have difficulty'. 'I'm a choice' is incorrect; it should be 'I make a choice'. Suggestion: Use correct noun forms and verb phrases for clarity.

× I think no, I think it. Depends on the situation.

✓ I think no, I think it depends on the situation.

The period after 'it' is incorrect and breaks the sentence. It should be one sentence: 'I think it depends on the situation.' Suggestion: Avoid unnecessary punctuation that breaks sentence flow.

× Expensive product on not or way better than cheaper 1 and I think cheaper sometimes cheaper 1 is more better is better and more affordable with my budget.

✓ Expensive products are not always better than cheaper ones, and I think sometimes cheaper ones are better and more affordable within my budget.

'Expensive product' should be plural 'products'. 'On not or way better' is incorrect; it should be 'are not always better'. 'Cheaper 1' is incorrect; it should be 'cheaper ones'. 'More better' is incorrect; 'better' is already comparative. Suggestion: Use plural forms for general statements, correct verb forms, and avoid redundant comparatives.