Shopping— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够清晰，语法和表达存在较多错误，导致意思难以理解。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用具体例子支持观点。

例: Yes, I like shopping because it makes me happy. For example, I enjoy using apps like Taobao to find good deals on clothes and other items.

提案: 回答内容较为重复，句子结构不够流畅。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，并避免重复表达相同意思。

例: Yes, I often compare prices on different apps because if one app offers cheaper prices, I choose it to save money while buying the same products.

提案: 表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，影响理解。建议先直接回答问题，然后用具体理由支持，并注意时态和句子结构。

例: Yes, it is difficult for me to make choices because I always want to pick the best product. Therefore, I spend a lot of time comparing options, but I enjoy shopping anyway.

提案: 回答内容混乱，语法和词汇使用错误较多，导致难以理解。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

例: No, I don't think expensive products are always better. For example, some affordable clothes are very useful and look good, even though they are cheaper.

× I think Emma type of people who really loved shopping, for example, I wouldn't buy clothes and other items.

✓ I think Emma is the type of person who really loves shopping. For example, I wouldn't buy clothes and other items.

这里's type of people'应为'singular'形式，改为'type of person'。动词'loved'应与主语保持一致，改为' loves'。另外，句子结构不完整，需加上'is'。

× Add on apps like topple and pinned or shopping make me feel happy and while choosing new thing I feel satisfied with my purchase.

✓ Add-on apps like Topple and Pinned for shopping make me feel happy, and while choosing new things, I feel satisfied with my purchase.

'Add on'应为复合形容词'Add-on'，'or shopping'用法不当，改为'for shopping'。'new thing'应为复数形式'new things'。句子中缺少逗号，需分隔句子。

× Yes, I often compare prices in different apps because I think if one apps had cheaper prices than other apps, I will choose the cheaper one because I think it can help me save my money and get the same things.

✓ Yes, I often compare prices in different apps because I think if one app has cheaper prices than other apps, I will choose the cheaper one because I think it can help me save my money and get the same things.

'one apps'应为单数形式'one app'。时态应保持一致，'had'改为'has'。

× Yes, I think it is quite difficult for me to choose when I was shopping because I'm a person who really want to the best one.

✓ Yes, I think it is quite difficult for me to choose when I am shopping because I'm a person who really wants the best one.

'when I was shopping'时态不符，改为'when I am shopping'。'want'应与主语一致，改为'wants'。

× But I got a thing, I will think is it the order better choice for me.

✓ But when I get something, I will think if it is the better choice for me.

'got a thing'表达不自然，改为'get something'。'is it the order better choice'语序错误，改为'if it is the better choice'。

× So it is spent me a lot of time, but I'm hapiness be 'cause I really love shopping.

✓ So it spends me a lot of time, but I'm happy because I really love shopping.

'it is spent me'用法错误，改为'it spends me'。'hapiness be'应为形容词'happy'。'be'多余，应删除。

× No, I didn't actually think that is right because there are many cheaper and better thing appearance such as.

✓ No, I don't actually think that is right because there are many cheaper and better things available, such as...

'didn't think'与后文时态不符，改为'don't think'。'thing'应为复数'things'。句子不完整，补充内容。

× Close all forward.

✓ Clothes are affordable.

'Close all forward'无意义，推测为'misheard'或拼写错误，应为'clothes'。需改为正确表达。

× It is very useful and cheaper but.

✓ It is very useful and cheaper, but I don't think it's really expensive.

句子不完整，缺少主语和谓语。'but'后应接完整句子。

× It is don't think really expensive.

✓ I don't think it is really expensive.

'It is don't think'语序错误，应为'I don't think it is'。