Shopping— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi phát âm hoặc từ sai. Hãy cố gắng trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, I really enjoy shopping, especially online, because it is convenient and I can find many options in my free time.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do một cách rõ ràng và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

例: Yes, I always compare prices before buying because I want to save money for my future expenses.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn rất khó hiểu do lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích lý do cụ thể.

例: Yes, sometimes it is difficult for me to make choices because there are many options available and I want to pick the best one.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý kiến nhưng cách diễn đạt không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, từ vựng phù hợp và giải thích ý kiến của mình rõ ràng hơn.

例: No, I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones. It depends on the person's needs and the quality of the product they want.

× Yes, I'm.

✓ Yes, I am.

The contraction 'I'm' is incomplete without a following verb or complement. It should be 'I am' followed by a verb or adjective to form a complete sentence. Here, 'Yes, I am' is the correct response to the question 'Do you like shopping?'.

× I'm a super holic so I'm off and stopping in my free time.

✓ I'm a shopaholic, so I go shopping in my free time.

The word 'super holic' is incorrect; the correct term is 'shopaholic'. Also, 'I'm off and stopping' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'I go shopping'. The sentence needs proper vocabulary and verb usage to convey the meaning clearly.

× Anne. I really like shopping online when I. Have. Many time.

✓ And I really like shopping online when I have a lot of time.

The sentence is fragmented and contains unnecessary periods. 'Anne' should be 'And'. 'Many time' should be 'a lot of time' or 'much time'. The sentence needs to be combined properly to make sense.

× When I. Portray any product I grant I tend to be combat right?

✓ When I buy any product, I think I tend to compare prices, right?

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words like 'portray' and 'grant'. The intended meaning is about comparing prices when buying products. The sentence needs restructuring and correct vocabulary.

× I think you know, I'm a children and I think I need to save main mainly money an.

✓ I think you know, I'm a child and I think I need to save mainly money.

'I'm a children' is incorrect because 'children' is plural; the singular form 'child' should be used. Also, 'main mainly money an' is incorrect; it should be 'mainly money'.

× From my future.

✓ For my future.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect here; 'for my future' is the correct phrase to express saving money to benefit one's future.

× Yes, I think is is.

✓ Yes, I think it is.

The sentence is missing the subject 'it'. 'Is is' is a repetition error. The correct sentence is 'Yes, I think it is.'

× If you come from my for me to make sure I when I shopping because I often combat the.

✓ It is hard for me to make sure when I am shopping because I often compare the options.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'If you come from my for me to make sure I when I shopping' is incorrect. The intended meaning is difficulty in making choices while shopping. The sentence needs to be restructured for clarity.

× Big cow available in the bright, rich in.

✓ Big choice available in the market.

'Big cow' and 'bright, rich in' are incorrect phrases. The intended meaning is 'big choice available in the market'. Correct vocabulary and phrasing are necessary.

× No, I don't think even see borders are way better cheaper one.

✓ No, I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words like 'even see borders'. The corrected sentence directly answers the question with proper grammar and vocabulary.

× Bigger.

✓ No correction needed as a standalone word; it should be removed or integrated properly.

'Bigger' alone is incomplete and does not form a sentence. It should be removed or included in a complete sentence.

× I think it depends on the person signing an Demandforce.

✓ I think it depends on the person and their demand for the product they want.

'Signing an Demandforce' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is that preference depends on the person and their demand. The sentence needs to be rephrased for clarity.

× Their product they want. Yeah.

✓ The product they want, yeah.

The sentence is fragmented. It should be combined with the previous sentence for clarity and completeness.