Shopping— Part 1 採点レポート

× Will I actually like?

✓ Do I actually like?

The sentence incorrectly uses 'Will' to ask about a present preference. 'Will' is used for future tense or willingness, but here the question is about a current liking, so 'Do' is appropriate.

× Do shopping but not always or I'm not shopaholic.

✓ I do shopping but not always, and I'm not a shopaholic.

The phrase 'Do shopping' is acceptable but the sentence structure is fragmented and missing conjunctions. Adding 'I' and 'and' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I do shopping.

✓ I go shopping.

While 'do shopping' is understandable, the more natural and common expression is 'go shopping'.

× Most of the time, eventually.

✓ Most of the time, occasionally.

'Eventually' means 'in the end' or 'after some time', which does not fit here. 'Occasionally' means 'sometimes', which fits the intended meaning better.

× Yes, whenever I do are go for shopping, I every time I compares the prices I first I check online if it's available in online I checked there and then I go for shopping and bargaining her because I'm as I'm a student so I have.

✓ Yes, whenever I go shopping, I always compare prices. First, I check online if it's available there, then I go shopping and bargain because I'm a student and I have limited money.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'do are go' is incorrect; 'compares' should be 'compare' to agree with 'I'; 'in online' should be 'online'; 'bargaining her' is incorrect and should be 'bargain'; 'I have.' is incomplete and should be 'I have limited money.' The correction addresses these issues for clarity and grammar.

× Unlimited money.

✓ Limited money.

The student likely meant they do not have unlimited money, so 'limited money' is the correct phrase to express financial constraints.

× No, actually not, because whenever I go for shopping I make a list and.

✓ No, actually not, because whenever I go shopping, I make a list and

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly and should be completed or connected properly.

× I know what should I buy and shouldn't, so it's not very difficult for me to shopping.

✓ I know what I should buy and what I shouldn't, so it's not very difficult for me to shop.

The sentence has incorrect word order in 'what should I buy' which should be 'what I should buy' in a statement. Also, 'to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to shop'.

× No, I don't think expensive product are always better because last time I bought a beauty blender.

✓ No, I don't think expensive products are always better because last time I bought a beauty blender.

The noun 'product' should be plural 'products' to agree with the plural verb 'are'.

× Which is very high price but it is not that good.

✓ Which is very expensive, but it is not that good.

The phrase 'very high price' is awkward; 'very expensive' is more natural. Also, the sentence is a fragment and should be connected properly to the previous sentence.

× What I have home which is cheaper than this.

✓ The one I have at home is cheaper than this.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a subject and verb. The correction provides a complete sentence with proper structure.

× So I don't think every time expensive products are good.

✓ So I don't think expensive products are always good.

The phrase 'every time' is incorrect here; 'always' is the correct adverb to express the intended meaning.