Shopping— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer shows enthusiasm but lacks clarity and coherence. Try to form complete sentences and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your response concise and directly answer the question with supporting details.

例: Yes, I really enjoy shopping because it allows me to explore new styles. However, I try to be careful with my spending to avoid buying unnecessary items.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Focus on speaking clearly and using correct verb forms. Use linking words to explain why you compare prices and provide specific reasons.

例: Yes, I often compare prices because online stores and physical shops sometimes have very different prices. This helps me find the best deal and save money.

提案: Your answer is somewhat confusing and repetitive. Try to organize your thoughts clearly and avoid filler words like 'like'. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about your shopping style.

例: Sometimes it is difficult to make choices because I have a specific style. However, when I visit a store that matches my taste, I immediately know what to buy.

提案: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and contains hesitations. Try to speak more fluently and use complete sentences. Provide clear reasons and examples to support your opinion.

例: I don't think expensive products are always better because sometimes you pay more for the brand's advertising. I prefer to buy from smaller brands that offer good quality at lower prices.

× I love shopping so much, but sometimes.

✓ I love shopping so much, but sometimes I spend too much money.

The original sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly, making it a sentence structure error. To improve, complete the thought by adding what happens sometimes, ensuring the sentence is complete and clear.

× I used to spend too much money on shopping things.

✓ I used to spend too much money on shopping items.

The phrase 'shopping things' is vague and unidiomatic. Replacing 'things' with 'items' is more appropriate and specific when referring to products bought while shopping.

× So I wouldn't really go out that much, but surely I love to go shopping.

✓ So I wouldn't really go out that much, but I surely love to go shopping.

The original sentence has awkward word order and conjunction use. Moving 'surely' before 'love' and removing the comma before 'but' improves clarity and flow.

× I often compares.

✓ I often compare.

The subject 'I' requires the base form of the verb without 's'. 'Compares' is incorrect here; it should be 'compare' to agree with the first person singular subject.

× Different commit did he's prices because it can sometimes get really different from what you get get online and the offline store and sometimes it's absolutely I think is something but different price.

✓ I compare different prices because they can sometimes be really different between online and offline stores, and sometimes I think the prices are absolutely different.

The original sentence is confusing and contains many errors including incorrect words and repetition. Rewriting it with clear subject-verb agreement and proper word choice improves comprehension.

× I wanna say it's difficult because sometimes I think I really like.

✓ I want to say it's difficult because sometimes I think I really like it.

The sentence ends abruptly without an object for 'like'. Adding 'it' clarifies what is liked, correcting the pronoun usage.

× I have like specific style that I often choose and if I like if I go to this cool thing story I will immediate know immediately know what I'm going to get and what is my style hottest.

✓ I have a specific style that I often choose, and if I go to a cool store, I will immediately know what I'm going to get and what my hottest style is.

The original sentence has multiple errors including missing articles, repeated words, and awkward phrasing. Correcting articles, removing repetition, and reordering words improves clarity and grammar.

× Or would I say that because sometimes, UM, expensive progress is more like.

✓ I would say that sometimes, expensive products are more like...

The word 'progress' is incorrect here; it should be 'products'. Also, 'Or would I say that' is awkward and unnecessary. Correcting the noun and simplifying the phrase improves clarity.

× Paying for it there. Brands like for their promotion and advertising spending, so I would choose like more like small brands.

✓ You are paying for the brand's promotion and advertising spending, so I would choose smaller brands instead.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Combining the ideas into a complete sentence with proper subject and verb improves understanding and grammatical correctness.