Shopping— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Try to give a direct response and explain your feelings about shopping clearly in simple English. Avoid unrelated or confusing words.

例: Yes, I like shopping because it is enjoyable and I can find things I need. However, I don't like shopping when the place is very crowded because it makes me uncomfortable.

提案: Your answer has good content but the sentences are confusing and some words are incorrect. Try to organize your ideas clearly using linking words and correct vocabulary. Also, avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

例: Yes, I always compare prices between online shops and physical stores. First, I check prices online to get an idea, then I visit the store to see the product. This helps me to bargain better and choose the best deal.

提案: Your answer is relevant but has some grammar mistakes and incomplete sentences. Try to use correct sentence structures and linking words to make your answer more natural and clear.

例: No, it is not difficult for me to make choices because I always prepare a shopping list before I go. This helps me to stick to my budget and avoid buying unnecessary things that just look nice.

提案: Your answer tries to give an opinion but is unclear and has many grammar errors. Try to express your ideas clearly with examples and use linking words to connect your points logically.

例: I think expensive products are not always better than cheaper ones. For example, if I see two pairs of socks, one costs $3 and the other $1, I would buy the cheaper one because it is enough for regular use and more affordable.

× I like to do shopping but not. Rush B are evident.

✓ I like to do shopping, but not in a rush.

The original sentence has sentence structure errors and unclear meaning. 'Rush B are evident' is incorrect and unrelated. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the structure.

× Yes, I always compare prices between online and in store if it is available and online with what I am going to buy.

✓ Yes, I always compare prices between online and in-store if available, and compare online prices with what I am going to buy.

The phrase 'between online and in store' needs a hyphen in 'in-store' and clearer structure. Also, 'if it is available and online with what I am going to buy' is unclear and corrected for clarity.

× So I just passed it straight into the online shops for the prices and then go for the install.

✓ So I just go straight to the online shops to check the prices and then go to the store.

'Passed it straight into the online shops' and 'go for the install' are incorrect phrases. The correction uses proper verbs and clearer meaning.

× Then I can bargaining and because I got some ideas through the online.

✓ Then I can bargain because I get some ideas through online shopping.

'Can bargaining' is incorrect; modal verbs like 'can' should be followed by the base verb 'bargain'. Also, 'through the online' is corrected to 'through online shopping' for clarity.

× No, it's not difficult because I always try to make a list before I go for shopping.

✓ No, it's not difficult because I always try to make a list before I go shopping.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping'.

× And I maintain the list always because it helped me to. Help me to be in my budget and not buying everything I see is cute.

✓ And I always maintain the list because it helps me stay within my budget and avoid buying everything I see that is cute.

The original sentence has sentence fragments and incorrect verb forms. 'Helped me to. Help me to be' is incorrect; corrected to 'helps me stay'. Also, 'not buying' is corrected to 'avoid buying' for grammatical correctness.

× Maybe expensive products are even better than cheaper one, but sometimes cheaper can be more convenient because.

✓ Maybe expensive products are even better than cheaper ones, but sometimes cheaper products can be more convenient.

The singular 'one' should be plural 'ones' to agree with 'products'. Also, the sentence is completed for clarity.

× There if you for example if you see two socks which are one is cost $3 and one is $1.00 for regulars I definitely would buy $1.00 because.

✓ For example, if you see two pairs of socks, one costing $3 and the other $1, I would definitely buy the $1 pair because...

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. Corrected for clarity, proper article use, and sentence structure.

× End of the day it will be. Rapture.

✓ At the end of the day, it will wear out.

'Rapture' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'wear out'. Also, sentence fragments are corrected to a complete sentence.