Shopping— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较简短且表达不够自然，建议使用更地道的表达方式，并且丰富细节，使回答更具体。

例: Yes, I enjoy shopping because it gives me a chance to relax and pick out things that I really like, such as clothes and gadgets.

提案: 表达不够流畅，'when I show up'用词不当，建议使用更自然的表达，并且说明比较价格的具体原因。

例: Yes, I always compare prices when I shop because I have a limited budget and want to find the best deals.

提案: 句子结构不完整，表达不清晰，建议使用完整句子并清楚说明难以选择的原因。

例: Yes, I find it difficult to make choices because I like to compare both the prices and the appearance of the products before deciding.

提案: 回答较好，但可以增加更多具体细节和例子，使观点更有说服力。

例: No, I don't think expensive products are always better. For example, some branded items are pricey mainly because of their name, but their quality may not be superior to cheaper alternatives.

× Yes, it is very hard for me to choose the ones I want to buy because. I always want to compare the prices and the appearance is more.

✓ Yes, it is very hard for me to choose the ones I want to buy because I always want to compare the prices and the appearance is important.

原句中“because.”后面断句不完整，导致句子结构错误。应将断句去掉，使句子连贯完整。此外，“the appearance is more”表达不完整，需补充完整意思，如“the appearance is important”。