Shopping— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 많으며, 문장이 명확하지 않습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하고, 불필요한 단어를 줄이며, 문법적 정확성을 높여야 합니다. 예를 들어, 'I don't like crowded places, so I usually shop online because websites offer the best deals and a wide variety of products at reduced prices.'와 같이 표현할 수 있습니다.

例: I don't like crowded places, so I usually shop online because websites offer the best deals and a wide variety of products at reduced prices.

提案: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 문장이 어색합니다. 질문에 직접 답하고, 이유를 명확하게 설명하며, 문장을 간결하게 구성해야 합니다. 예를 들어, 'Yes, I always compare prices before buying because it helps me find reasonable choices and suitable products.'라고 말할 수 있습니다.

例: Yes, I always compare prices before buying because it helps me find reasonable choices and suitable products.

提案: 답변이 문법적으로 매우 부정확하고 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 질문에 직접 답하고, 이유를 명확히 하며, 문장을 간결하고 자연스럽게 만들어야 합니다. 예를 들어, 'Yes, I find it difficult to choose products, so I usually shop with my friends who give me good advice.'라고 표현할 수 있습니다.

例: Yes, I find it difficult to choose products, so I usually shop with my friends who give me good advice.

提案: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 의미가 불분명합니다. 질문에 명확히 답하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하며, 문장을 자연스럽게 구성해야 합니다. 예를 들어, 'Usually, I think expensive products are better, but not always. Sometimes, cheaper products can be just as good.'라고 말할 수 있습니다.

例: Usually, I think expensive products are better, but not always. Sometimes, cheaper products can be just as good.

× I usually buy things on the Internet because website offer the best deal and you can buy all kind of thing at reduced price.

✓ I usually buy things on the Internet because websites offer the best deals and you can buy all kinds of things at reduced prices.

The sentence has errors related to the use of 'website' which should be plural 'websites' to match the plural subject with the verb 'offer'. Also, 'all kind of thing' should be 'all kinds of things' to correctly express the plural form. Additionally, 'deal' and 'price' should be plural to match the context. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1).

× I compare, I'm usually to I want to buy, I compare the price because it is more reasonable choice and I have a more suitable product to get it.

✓ I usually compare the prices when I want to buy because it is a more reasonable choice and I can get a more suitable product.

The original sentence has plural and singular mismatches such as 'the price' which should be 'the prices' when comparing, and 'more reasonable choice' should be preceded by an article 'a'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward and needs rephrasing for clarity. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1) and sentence structure issue (ID 26). However, only singular and plural issues are corrected as per instructions.

× Absolutely I have to difficult to the product so I my friend gave me object advice on the product when I when I want to buy.

✓ Absolutely, I have difficulty with the product, so my friend gave me objective advice on the product when I want to buy.

The phrase 'have to difficult to the product' is incorrect; it should be 'have difficulty with the product'. Also, 'object advice' should be 'objective advice'. The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used and should be 'with'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions issue (ID 11).

× Usually I think the expensive product is more better, but always is not.

✓ Usually, I think the expensive product is better, but it is not always so.

The phrase 'more better' is incorrect because 'better' is already a comparative form and does not need 'more'. Also, 'always is not' should be 'it is not always so' for correct word order. This is a comparative and superlative error (ID 25) and sentence structure error (ID 26), but only singular and plural and comparative errors are corrected as per instructions.