Shopping— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Isku day inaad si toos ah uga jawaabto su'aasha adigoo isticmaalaya jumlado kooban oo macno leh. Ka fogow weedho aan la fahmi karin iyo erayo aan ku habboonayn. Tusaale ahaan, ka jawaab su'aasha adigoo sheegaya inaad jeceshahay wax iibsiga iyo sababta, adigoo isticmaalaya weedho kooban oo cad.

例: Yes, I like shopping because it helps me find things I need. However, I usually buy only what I can afford since I don't have a steady income.

提案: Isku day inaad si cad u sharaxdo sababta aad u isbarbar dhigto qiimaha adigoo isticmaalaya weedho isku xiran. Ka fogow ku celcelinta iyo erayada aan habboonayn. Isticmaal erayo kala duwan oo ku habboon mawduuca si aad u muujiso fahamkaaga.

例: Yes, I always compare prices because I prefer buying expensive items like bags and perfumes. I believe expensive products have better quality, so I want to make sure I get the best value.

提案: Jawaabtaada ka dhig mid kooban oo si toos ah uga jawaabta su'aasha. Isticmaal weedho isku xiran si aad u muujiso sababta ay u adag tahay inaad doorato, adigoo si cad u sharaxaya fikradaada. Ka fogow erayada aan la fahmi karin iyo khaladaadka.

例: Yes, sometimes it is difficult to choose because I focus on quality. I prefer expensive items since they usually last longer, so I think carefully before buying.

提案: Isku day inaad si cad oo kooban uga jawaabto su'aasha adigoo isticmaalaya tusaalooyin iyo erayo kala duwan. Ka fogow ku celcelinta iyo khaladaadka naxwaha. Isticmaal weedho isku xiran si aad u muujiso fikradaada si habboon.

例: Yes, I think expensive products are usually better because they have higher quality. For example, an expensive phone often works faster and lasts longer than a cheap one.

× I don't have a boyfriend to give me money to buy a shopping or everything that I want.

✓ I don't have a boyfriend to give me money to buy shopping or everything that I want.

The word 'shopping' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by an article like 'a'. Using 'a shopping' is incorrect because 'shopping' refers to the activity or items collectively, not a countable object.

× So I'm also not work because the problem is dead.

✓ So I am also not working because the problem is difficult.

The phrase 'I'm also not work' is incorrect because 'work' needs to be in the present participle form 'working' after 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'the problem is dead' is unclear; likely intended to express difficulty or a problem being serious.

× So where I can get where I can find the money to buy a shopping?

✓ So where can I get or find the money to buy shopping?

The sentence structure is incorrect. In questions, the auxiliary verb 'can' should come before the subject 'I'. Also, 'buy a shopping' is incorrect; 'shopping' is uncountable and does not take 'a'.

× Yes, I like expensive items like bag, like perfume, like many things that I want and also my skin care.

✓ Yes, I like expensive items like bags, perfume, many things that I want, and also my skincare products.

The word 'bag' should be plural 'bags' to match 'items'. 'Skin care' should be combined as 'skincare' and made plural or specified as 'skincare products' to be clear.

× So if I not compare that I feel stressed or disgusting because I don't like cheap things.

✓ So if I do not compare, I feel stressed or disgusted because I don't like cheap things.

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'do' for negation in present tense. Also, 'disgusting' is an adjective describing something that causes disgust; the correct feeling is 'disgusted'.

× I like expensive things you know So why that's why I want to buy expensive.

✓ I like expensive things, you know. So that's why I want to buy expensive items.

The sentence lacks proper punctuation and structure. Adding commas and periods improves clarity. Also, 'buy expensive' is incomplete; it should be 'buy expensive items'.

× Actually, yes, I like expensive items because when you choose they are good quality.

✓ Actually, yes, I like expensive items because when you choose them, they are of good quality.

The pronoun 'they' refers to 'items', so 'choose they' is incorrect; it should be 'choose them'. Also, 'good quality' is better expressed as 'of good quality'.

× So that's why I chose because the good quality and I'm not care the expensive they are whether where is the weather is expensive or not, but I care the question.

✓ So that's why I choose them because of the good quality, and I don't care whether they are expensive or not, but I care about the quality.

The verb 'chose' is past tense; present tense 'choose' fits better here. 'I'm not care' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't care'. The phrase 'whether where is the weather is expensive' is confusing and should be simplified to 'whether they are expensive or not'. 'I care the question' is incorrect; it should be 'I care about the quality'.

× Actually, yes, the expensive products are are good quality and cheap product.

✓ Actually, yes, expensive products are of good quality, and cheap products are not.

The sentence has a repeated word 'are are'. Also, 'cheap product' should be plural 'cheap products' to match 'expensive products'. The sentence is incomplete and needs clarification.

× So that's why the people they interested expensive thing.

✓ So that's why people are interested in expensive things.

The phrase 'the people they interested' is redundant; either 'the people are interested' or 'people are interested' is correct. Also, 'interested expensive thing' is incorrect; it should be 'interested in expensive things'.

× So the cheaper is always when you buy it have not good quality.

✓ So cheaper products always do not have good quality when you buy them.

'The cheaper' is incomplete; it should be 'cheaper products'. The verb agreement is incorrect; 'have' should be 'does not have' or 'do not have' depending on the subject. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'products'.

× So that's why the people they not like that cheaper.

✓ So that's why people do not like cheaper products.

'The people they not like' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'people do not like'. 'That cheaper' is unclear; it should be 'cheaper products'.