Shopping— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, làm cho ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

例: Yes, I love shopping, especially online shopping because it is convenient and I can find many pretty things that I need.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn.

例: Yes, I usually compare prices when I shop, especially for expensive items. For example, I check different stores to find the best deal because I want to ensure the quality matches the brand. However, if the item is necessary and worth the cost, I don't mind paying a higher price.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh để diễn đạt ý rõ ràng hơn.

例: Yes, it is difficult for me to make choices when I shop because I am easily attracted to new or trendy items. Whenever I see something interesting, I feel like buying it even if I don't really need it, so it's hard to decide.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp.

例: Definitely. I think expensive products are often better than cheaper ones because higher prices usually reflect better quality and durability. For example, when I buy electronic devices, I prefer to spend more money to ensure they last longer and perform well.

× Huddersen I love shopping, especially unlike shopping because I love the way I roll the the platform of shopping online and buy the spend money on the pretty things I need.

✓ Huddersfield, I love shopping, especially online shopping because I love the way I use the platform to shop online and spend money on the pretty things I need.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and unclear phrases such as 'roll the the platform of shopping online' which should be 'use the platform to shop online'. Also, 'buy the spend money' is incorrect; it should be 'spend money'. Correct preposition usage improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I usually compare prices when I serve, especially for expensive or important items.

✓ Yes, I usually compare prices when I shop, especially for expensive or important items.

The word 'serve' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'shop'. This is a sentence structure error where the wrong verb is used, leading to confusion. Using the correct verb 'shop' aligns with the context of comparing prices.

× For example, if you want to buy a new and trade different store to find the best deal.

✓ For example, if you want to buy something new, you can trade between different stores to find the best deal.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks proper structure. It misses a subject and verb agreement and clarity. Adding 'you can trade between different stores' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Because I want to make sure the brand matches the qualities.

✓ Because I want to make sure the brand matches the quality.

'Qualities' is plural, but 'quality' is the correct singular noun to refer to the standard of the brand. Using the singular form fits the context better.

× However, if item is necessary and worth the cost, I don't mind paying a higher pay a high higher price.

✓ However, if the item is necessary and worth the cost, I don't mind paying a higher price.

The sentence misses the article 'the' before 'item' and repeats 'pay a higher' unnecessarily. Correcting these improves grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× Absolutely yes. Is it difficult for me to make sure make choices when I stop because I'm easily attracted to Brady or new items?

✓ Absolutely yes. It is difficult for me to make choices when I shop because I'm easily attracted to brand new items.

The original sentence has errors such as 'make sure make choices' and 'stop' instead of 'shop', and 'Brady' instead of 'brand'. Correcting these errors fixes sentence structure and meaning.

× Whenever I see something interesting or fashionable I feel like buying it, even if if I don't really like need it this much.

✓ Whenever I see something interesting or fashionable, I feel like buying it, even if I don't really need it that much.

The phrase 'like need' is incorrect; it should be 'need'. Also, 'if if' is a repetition error. Correcting these improves pronoun and verb usage.

× Definitely. I think expensive products are often better than cheaper ones because the higher good prices usually reflect better quality and durability.

✓ Definitely. I think expensive products are often better than cheaper ones because higher prices usually reflect better quality and durability.

The phrase 'the higher good prices' is incorrect; 'higher prices' is sufficient and grammatically correct. Removing unnecessary words clarifies the sentence.

× For example, when I buy electronic device, I refer to spend more money to ensure they last longer and perform well.

✓ For example, when I buy an electronic device, I prefer to spend more money to ensure it lasts longer and performs well.

The sentence misses the article 'an' before 'electronic device' and uses 'refer to spend' incorrectly; it should be 'prefer to spend'. Also, 'they' should be 'it' to agree with the singular 'device'. These corrections fix singular/plural agreement and verb usage.