Shopping— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，且句子结构较为混乱。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复表达，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: I didn't enjoy shopping in the past because it was tiring to go out. However, nowadays I like shopping online because it's convenient and I can choose many kinds of products easily.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并注意词汇的准确使用。

例: When I was a child, I didn't compare prices because I didn't care about money. But now, I always compare prices because managing my budget is important.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不流畅，建议完整回答问题，避免句子中断，并使用连贯的句子表达观点。

例: It depends on the product. For example, when buying toys, I find it hard to choose because many are attractive. But for daily necessities, it's usually easy to decide.

提案: 回答较为完整且有逻辑，但有重复词汇和轻微语法错误。建议注意避免重复，使用更准确的表达，使回答更自然流畅。

例: I don't think expensive products are always better. Many factors affect quality, such as brand reputation and where the product is sold. Sometimes cheaper products use newer technology, so price doesn't always reflect quality.

× Well, actually in the past I don't enjoy shopping because I have to hang out and it was very tired.

✓ Well, actually in the past I didn't enjoy shopping because I had to hang out and it was very tiring.

这里描述的是过去的情况，动词时态应使用过去式。'don't enjoy'应改为'didn't enjoy'，'have to'应改为'had to'，'tired'用来形容人感到累，形容词应为'tiring'来描述使人感到累的事物。

× But these days I enjoy it very much because I could shopping online and choose every kind of kinds of products just by moving my fingers.

✓ But these days I enjoy it very much because I can shop online and choose every kind of product just by moving my fingers.

'could shopping'结构错误，'could'后应接动词原形'shop'。'kinds of products'重复，正确表达为'every kind of product'。

× Well, actually when I was a child, I never compared the prices because I believed that if I just won this one, I will not care about his money.

✓ Well, actually when I was a child, I never compared the prices because I believed that if I just won this one, I would not care about his money.

条件句中表示过去或假设情况时，主句应使用过去式或虚拟语气，'will'应改为'would'。

× But those days I started to compare comparing prices because I think the money and budget is very important in my life.

✓ But those days I started to compare prices because I think money and budget are very important in my life.

'started to compare comparing'重复，正确用法是'started to compare'或'started comparing'。'money'前不加定冠词，'money and budget'为复数，谓语动词应用复数'are'。

× Well, actually it depends on the types of the products.

✓ Well, actually it depends on the type of product.

'types of the products'表达不自然，通常说'type of product'表示类别。

× For example, if I want to buy some toys and all of them are beautiful and cute, maybe I will feel difficult to make my choices.

✓ For example, if I want to buy some toys and all of them are beautiful and cute, maybe I will find it difficult to make my choices.

'feel difficult'用法错误，应使用'find it difficult'来表达感到困难。

× But if I just want to buy some daily life NE necessities, I will not feel difficult because I.

✓ But if I just want to buy some daily necessities, I will not find it difficult because I know what I need.

句子不完整，'daily life NE necessities'表达不清，改为'daily necessities'更准确。'feel difficult'应改为'find it difficult'。补充完整句子使其通顺。

× Well, actually I don't think so because many factors affect their quality.

✓ Well, actually I don't think so because many factors affect quality.

'their quality'指代不明，直接用'quality'更合适。

× For example, the same product can have different prices depending on where it is sold or the brand reputation.

✓ For example, the same product can have different prices depending on where it is sold or on the brand reputation.

'depending on'后应接介词短语，'or the brand reputation'应改为'or on the brand reputation'。

× Also sometimes cheaper products use newer technology, so price doesn't always always mean better quality.

✓ Also, sometimes cheaper products use newer technology, so price doesn't always mean better quality.

句首应加逗号分隔，'always always'重复，应去掉一个。