Shopping— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi sai về thì và số nhiều. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp từ và câu quá dài. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

例: I don't like shopping because I prefer quiet places to crowded ones. Also, shopping takes a lot of my time and makes me feel tired.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là chia động từ và cấu trúc câu. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn nên cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

例: Yes, I usually compare prices when I shop because I want to save money. I often research prices online before making a purchase.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

例: I find it easy to make choices when shopping because I usually research products beforehand. This helps me decide quickly in the store.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là số nhiều và cách dùng từ. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "sounds way better" và nên cung cấp lý do cụ thể hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I think expensive products are usually better because they are made from higher quality materials. For example, expensive food often tastes better and feels more satisfying.

× Oh, I'm a person who don't like to go shopping because I like quietness instead of crowded and for me it take me a lot of time and it is very tiring.

✓ Oh, I'm a person who doesn't like to go shopping because I like quietness instead of crowded places and for me it takes a lot of time and it is very tiring.

The subject 'who' refers to 'a person' which is singular, so the verb should be 'doesn't' instead of 'don't' (Grammar problem type ID 27). Also, 'it take me' should be 'it takes me' to agree with singular subject 'it' (Grammar problem type ID 27). Additionally, 'crowded' is an adjective and needs a noun to modify, so 'crowded places' is correct (Grammar problem type ID 11).

× Oh I usually compare price when go shopping because I want to save my money and I usually find about it before buy and before buying in.

✓ Oh, I usually compare prices when I go shopping because I want to save my money and I usually find out about it before buying.

The noun 'price' should be plural 'prices' because multiple items are compared (Grammar problem type ID 1). The subject 'I' is missing before 'go shopping' (Grammar problem type ID 26). The phrase 'find about it' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'find out about it' (Grammar problem type ID 11). The phrase 'before buy and before buying in' is incorrect and redundant; 'before buying' suffices (Grammar problem type ID 26).

× Oh I think it is easy for me because I usually check it before making a purchase and when shopping I have a choice very fast.

✓ Oh, I think it is easy for me because I usually check before making a purchase and when shopping I make choices very quickly.

The phrase 'check it' is vague; 'check' without 'it' is clearer (Grammar problem type ID 26). 'I have a choice very fast' is awkward; 'I make choices very quickly' is more natural and grammatically correct (Grammar problem type ID 26).

× Yeah, I think product sounds way better because it is made by a lot of better materials and it bring me a lot of good feeling when you eat.

✓ Yeah, I think products sound way better because they are made with a lot of better materials and they bring me a lot of good feelings when I eat.

'Product' should be plural 'products' to match 'cheaper ones' in the question (Grammar problem type ID 1). The verb 'sounds' should be 'sound' to agree with plural subject 'products' (Grammar problem type ID 27). 'Made by' should be 'made with' to indicate materials used (Grammar problem type ID 11). 'It bring' should be 'they bring' to agree with plural subject (Grammar problem type ID 27). 'Good feeling' should be plural 'good feelings' to express multiple positive sensations (Grammar problem type ID 1). 'When you eat' should be 'when I eat' to maintain first person perspective (Grammar problem type ID 12).